Sincere & Vettori- Wonder Where You Are +

[Vettori]

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=150262&p=2025830#p2025830 <--LTF'

http://soundcloud.com/daniel-king-23/si ... nder-where

Plus there is 2-3 new songs uploaded on the page. So if you have the time, Check them out

I'm sure we can all relate to this, and if not at this time in life. At some time.

[Eedee]

That beat felt really old school; must've been the drums. I liked it a lot. That sampled chorus was pretty sick and gave me a nostalgic feel for some reason.

First verse had good flow, lyrics were deep, rhyming I felt could've been better, but it still was decent.

Second verse, this was yours I think? Probably the better verse on this. I liked the emotion behind the words in your delivery.

I was really digging this joint.

[RainMan44]

I'm feeling the beat. It's different.

The first verse also has a nice flow like Eedee said, it's not a basic boring flow. It's very wavey, just flows like a river. I like it. The delivery was what stood out on this verse, though. Great, great chill laid-back yet aggressive delivery. Suits the song nicely.

I'm digging the second verse as well. Delivery is also a strong point in this verse. You say some ill shit, it's some relatable stuff. Overall that's what makes this track, it sounds like something most people can relate too. The beat is dope, the verses are nice, the delivery is great, chorus is dope, etc. Everything about this track just gels so well. One listen in and I'm left wanting more (in a good way). This track is just put together beautifully, great stuff guys.


Return the favor please? viewtopic.php?f=38&t=150350

[Trimss]

Guy on the 1st verse: I liked your delivery. some may find it boring, but it's actually like you're showing your real state of mind, a sad and good delivery. The sample/hook is pretty cool too, and I liked the beat.

Great song man.. It is true that a lot of us can relate to it. I liked the first verse more, I think Vettori is on the second one, it's dope too.. But I like the first more.

[Vettori]

tyvm Wer'e all working on some new ones Hopefully we can get a little better each song