Eedee ft. Precision - "All Smiles" [Week 5]

[Eedee]

LoF

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Week 5 of 8

Eedee; WordSmith

[Intro]
Feels good to be back in the studio, man...
I brought WordSmith in here too.
(Let's do this)

[Verse 1]
Hair more golden than sunlight, even in the dark night,
She parts away the clouds and makes the world feel right.
Her eyes alluring, Her smile enduring,
It makes me fall faster and leaves my heart burning.
She drives away depression, can't even feel aggression,
Elation and Celebration are my only expressions.
She loves me past my faults, even proves some to be false,
Her touch quickens my breathing and pulse.
Feeling so shook, so alone on this campus,
Dreaming it off, no one's shown that I have it.
Lonely connections, I hear a knock and I'm stumped,
I chalked it to someone I didn't want but I come.
I'm shocked what was up and who was standing before me,
She said "Hey, are you Eric? I think you actually know me"
I shook my head, looked instead, the floor was my gaze,
I had lunch with a friend and that much more every day.

[Chorus]
These ups and downs, we have miles to go,
Scream it fucking loud and wear a smile you know...
(I'm all smiles......) (x2)


[Verse 2]
I haven't felt like this since God knows when,
Nothing in the world can stop those men.
I'm on the highest high, high up on the highest cloud
Flying high, I die inside, so high it's like I'm smilin' down.
Wavin' round for all of ya'll, I feel so good right and now
I'm so high up in the air it might be hard for me to find the ground.
I'ma scream this aloud, hoping that they heard this,
I've never felt so good, so go and take it away WordSmith!
Heaven, that's what it feels like sittin up here
Sun shining on my face, the sky is so clear.
Surrounded by the people who actually care
Fresher than air is the feeling that I feel right there.
It's great, better than it's ever been
but then again, I never thought there'd be a time when
the world felt right, like it has tonight,
it's like the darknes was replaced with light.

[Verse 3]
*LYRICS COMING SOON*

[Trimss]

I'll be honest with you. I didn't like the first verse and was about to stop listening.. But I went on, and I heard that second verse. The 4 first bars are awesome, lyrics, content and delivery wise. Epic my friend.

[Blu]

The first dude has a weird delivery/flow/voice. Needs to work on that.

[Eedee]

I'll be honest with you. I didn't like the first verse and was about to stop listening.. But I went on, and I heard that second verse. The 4 first bars are awesome, lyrics, content and delivery wise. Epic my friend.

Thanks. This was the first song we did together so we didn't have that chemistry (plus the first song WordSmith ever wrote, first ever time on the mic), so I didn't expect this to be favored ahead of the others I released, but I'm glad you liked that part.

[Eedee]

The first dude has a weird delivery/flow/voice. Needs to work on that.

Yep he was just starting on this song. He's gotten better, we're doing a mixtape this December, so it should be better than this.

Thanks for the listen!

[Trimss]

I'm posting a thread in like 5 minutes Eedee, will you mind returnin the feed?

[Eedee]

I'm posting a thread in like 5 minutes Eedee, will you mind returnin the feed?

Yessir.

edit: Yessir as in, I will return it. Not that I mind lol

[RainMan44]

I feel neutral about this piece. The first verse started off a bit dull but gradually picked up. The flow was solid from both of you. The delivery is my main problem with the first part of the first verse, but with a little practice that will be good to go. I see you though. Good shit.

The chorus is actually good, with a little more editing I could visualize it as a very nice little melodic chorus. I like it.

The intensity of the second verse when it starts is off the chain. Great rhymes too from both of you. Overall a good piece, and with a little revision and editing I think this can be a track with much replay value. Not a big fan of the beat though, but solid drop guys.