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Track http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IbOhS_z3224&feature=youtu.be
I'm on the first verse, the 2nd and 3rd verse is my homie Bones. Check it out and rate/hate/etc.
Eloquence (aka RainMan44) & Bones - Untouchable
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Eloquence (aka RainMan44) & Bones - Untouchable
by RainMan44 » Nov 2nd, '12, 09:01
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
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Re: Eloquence (aka RainMan44) & Bones - Untouchable
by Eedee » Nov 2nd, '12, 09:51
Holy shit this was fucking old school as fuck.
I love your voice and flow. You had great rhymes and it coupled well with the previous constituents of your verse. Sounded REALLY nice.
The other verses were great as well but I enjoyed yours the most.
I love your voice and flow. You had great rhymes and it coupled well with the previous constituents of your verse. Sounded REALLY nice.
The other verses were great as well but I enjoyed yours the most.
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Re: Eloquence (aka RainMan44) & Bones - Untouchable
by RainMan44 » Nov 6th, '12, 02:15
Thank you bro, I appreciate that. Is there anything in particular you got that you want me to feed? Just hmu.
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
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Re: Eloquence (aka RainMan44) & Bones - Untouchable
by Trimss » Nov 10th, '12, 00:49
Your flow is dope man, and like Eedee said, this sounds oldschool. I loved your flow around 1.00 
, also the intro was pretty dope. It adds a lot to songs.
Your verse was my favorite. Bones was good too, though.
, also the intro was pretty dope. It adds a lot to songs.Your verse was my favorite. Bones was good too, though.
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Re: Eloquence (aka RainMan44) & Bones - Untouchable
by RainMan44 » Nov 10th, '12, 09:48
Thanks for the feed G!
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
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Re: Eloquence (aka RainMan44) & Bones - Untouchable
by Slim Fiasco » Nov 10th, '12, 10:13
The song was awesome, I like how the whole thing has been put together, with the movie dialogs and all. Your flow (voice) is really nice, and that was a great verse. Keep it up!
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