Mr. DGAF - "Unique"

[Eedee]

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*This was recorded before Picture My Words, so don't think he isn't taking your advice. We just decided to drop this gem for shits and giggles.


The power's brewing, stewing louder than a crockpot
Searching for a surge, inserting hours in a stopwatch
Certain now I'm worthless, how have I witnessed my true peak
If my purpose now is rhyming my gift isn't unique
There's kids with a new scheme, only knew to them
There isn't a school for this, learn or don't but working shows some useful tips
For the youthful kids who use a pen, it's all been done before
From pac to dre, run of course had lots to say, Pun and more
Have hung the torch up on a mantle, deemed the GOATS
All the rappers fiend the most to see the globe with champ and sing a toast
Man my feeble flows are barely audible, there's a starting point
Clearly got his notes and watched the pro's, hearing artists go
From authors to a cocky schmoe once the green arrives
Has redeemed his life, wants an offer so he dreams to sign
With the Roc, but you he'll keep his pride, wouldn't change for phonies
Just to hang with homies, maybe though we ain't close,
You say you know me
But I can't recall, damnit y'all have seen us grow
People come, people go, see it's no easy road
Blowing g's ain't for me, take a cheap modest spot
Keep honest, all dreams falling in a sleek starting slot
Calling shots with a beat, tryna get separation
Give it all I got, keep grinding till celebration
Flyin' up to heaven's gates, ironic that I'm pigeon holed
Spittin' dope lines with no dealer now but still I'm broke.

Why do I write this music?
Why do I try and find a groove?
Cuz if my rhymes are useless,
Then I'll find a different route.
Wasting time, I'm foolish,
If I think that I prevail.
In my mind I do it,
Only I hope that I don't fail...

[Block]

I'm assuming this isnt you? Dude is reading / whispering though. Not much you can critique when that happens bro.

[Mr.DGAF]

No, it's me. It's basically just to test for flow. I know there isn't too much to say, I need to work on delivery, breath control; basically everything. Just trying to get into it, I'm not too worried about delivery because I intentionally have to tone it down for the people who have live with me. In a year or so I'll have access to a studio (this was recorded on a phone haha), and will be able to let it all out. Just looking for the feel of recording at the moment.

But I definitely appreciate the look man, not many people have even looked. I'm taking what everyone's saying into consideration.

[Eedee]

Nah it's not me, it's DGAF.

Thanks for the looks, we appreciate it.

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Overall i like that track, it would be nice to here a better quality recording of the same song. Good delivery rhyme scheme and flow the only thing that's lacking is recording quality and the fact that the vocals aren't lined up perfectly with the beat.

[Block]

Overall i like that track, it would be nice to here a better quality recording of the same song. Good delivery rhyme scheme and flow the only thing that's lacking is recording quality and the fact that the vocals aren't lined up perfectly with the beat.

>says random shit without listening to the song


I feel you, Mr. when I first started I whispered as well. I didnt even know I was doing it. Confidence issue on the mic, I suppose. And yeah, it's hard when people live with you.. Especially if they dont know you're trying to get into rapping.

Your flow was decent though for a first timer. Stuff just comes with time. Keep at it man.