Monsters in my head remix

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What's up guys its Mitch aka Cryptic, just looking for some feedback on a song i just recorded with my buddy, here's the link

LoF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=150761&p=2041471#p2041471

Song - http://soundcloud.com/cryptic6/monsterz


Side note: First verse and second half of the second verse is me, the song also features my two friends, track is still under construction so all feedback is greatly appreciated.

[Ticalrecords]

loll you are pretty good, the second other guy sounded half asleep though, no offense. you got flow though fasho. i liked the hook too.

mind critiquing one of mine?
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[MistaVijilantee]

What's up guys its Mitch aka Cryptic, just looking for some feedback on a song i just recorded with my buddy, here's the link

http://soundcloud.com/cryptic6/monsters


Side note: I'm first and last, my buddy goes second, also all feedback is greatly appreciated.

Your first verse was really nicely done, although watch sometimes, your breath falters a bit.
No offense, but your homie kind of ruined the track for me, I was really digging your lyrics and then his voice got a bit annoying nd his wordplay was pretty average.

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Thanks guys, on note of my buddy, his verse was actually a freestyle so that part's unfinnished. Also as i havent really started edited the track yet so hopefully i can fix that breathing thing. Thanks for the positive feedback guys!

[Trimss]

You have to feed some other track and link it in your thread buddy.

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You have to feed some other track and link it in your thread buddy.

ok buddy.

[TripleNineThree]

"ok buddy." sounded pretty disrespectful to a vet who knows what he's talking about. read the rules before you post. your topic is locked until you PM me a valid link of feedback.