The file worked for me so here's some feed!
Verse 1 - This verse is good. The flow is good and so is the delivery. The delivery could be a little better with a tiny bit more emotion. The quality is what stands out, you must have a pretty decent mic and mixing skills. The lyrics are also really good, you have multis throughout the entire verse which sounds good.
Chorus - The chorus is good as far as writing goes but the mixing could be better. I don't think you have the best singing voice but it sounds okay. If it was mixed a little better it would sound pretty good I think.
Verse 2 - Same as verse 1. You changed your flow up on this verse and I enjoy that it's different and it still sounds good. There aren't as much multis in this verse though, I definitely enjoyed verse 1 more
Solid track, keep it up fam!
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