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Not Perfect - Eedee Ft. TripleNineThree

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Not Perfect - Eedee Ft. TripleNineThree

Postby TripleNineThree » Nov 26th, '12, 16:09

Shout out to Eedee for thinking of this concept. The first verse is Eedee explaining why he doesn't believe in Christianity and the second verse is me explaining why I am a Christian. This is off of Eedee's new mixtape "Lights Out" - You can download the mixtape and give it feedback here - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=151051

LoF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=150652
Song - http://soundcloud.com/tripleninethree/n ... t-triple93

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Verse 1 (Eedee)
I know I'm not perfect but I'm trying to live,
My soul's a hot surface that is rising through sin.
Or at least that's what they tell me, destined by Hell, we
Need the cure they're selling, yelling, but I'm delving
To the root of the problem, using a condom
Is bad say the Pope, I see the truth in the hotspot.
I'm on a mission - You saw me flinching,
Nah, I'm just cringing from all the contradictions.
They indoctrinate children in Sunday school,
You can marry your rape victim, a one-way rule.
If something good happens they say "God is great!"
Otherwise it's not His way, and if you saw His face
The race is on in his mysterious ways,
He never seems to help me ever clear up the pain.
It's certainly true that I'm not worthy to you,
That shoulder weight isn't sin, but the burden of proof.

Verse 2 (TripleNineThree)
They looking at me weird thinking that I'm stupid
Cuz I believe in the King so let's do this

It is so foolish to say that there is no God
-Judging Christ by His followers.. Hoobla

-All of creation points to the Rula
Men supress the Truth because of wickedness

-We are here by chance? Gibberish
I am here to proclaim that we will live again

If you rebel against His Name then the end of it
-You'll be in the pit, my faith is not blind

If Jesus didn't resurrect then my rhymes crime
-Maybe it never happened, He is the wrong guy

Then how come all the Apostles said bye bye
-Were they willing to die, for their own lie?

There's too much proof to put up into a sixteen
You wanna know the truth? Jesus is King!
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Re: Not Perfect - Eedee Ft. TripleNineThree

Postby Eedee » Nov 26th, '12, 18:22

Thanks for posting this.

This was produced by Sinima Beats, by the way. :y:
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Re: Not Perfect - Eedee Ft. TripleNineThree

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Nov 26th, '12, 18:32

Damn this was pretty cool!! Eedee still killing it with the multis, you stayed on topic pretty good nice job! Triple 9 three youve gotten a lot better since I was last on here and you were already really good! Both of you guys's flow is really good, when I was reading the lyrics before listening I didnt think some parts would flow very good but they did! the delivery is amazing, you guys have that down pretty good!

Awesome piece keep it up guys!
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Re: Not Perfect - Eedee Ft. TripleNineThree

Postby Eedee » Nov 26th, '12, 18:48

Thanks, man. Appreciate the good looks.
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Re: Not Perfect - Eedee Ft. TripleNineThree

Postby AbramIsaac » Dec 9th, '12, 22:53

Good track guys. :y:

The only thing I would change would be the fact that the deliveries are different. Eedee doesn't pack in the lyrics as tight, so the verses sound less cohesive, but the concept is cool, and you guys did a good job.
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Re: Not Perfect - Eedee Ft. TripleNineThree

Postby TripleNineThree » Dec 9th, '12, 23:34

Thanks fam!
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Re: Not Perfect - Eedee Ft. TripleNineThree

Postby Eedee » Dec 10th, '12, 11:48

Thanks, Abram!
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Re: Not Perfect - Eedee Ft. TripleNineThree

Postby Trimss » Dec 10th, '12, 21:46

This was good. :y: I liked it guys!

993, I still have the verse and chorus that you sent me. I'm still writing on it. Didn't have much time but that will definitely come out soon. (Just so you don't think I forgot or something!)
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Re: Not Perfect - Eedee Ft. TripleNineThree

Postby TripleNineThree » Dec 11th, '12, 04:55

Sounds good man! I mite want to re-do the hook. Send me your stuff when it's all done and I'll decide if I want to re-do the hook then
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