Game Over Ft. 737

[TripleNineThree]

A song from my upcoming mixtape that I will be releasing in about a month. The name of the mixtape is "Game Over" so this is the defining song.

When you click the link to play the song, it should automatically play in your browser.
Song - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oJ_v2--Srss
LoF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=151013&p=2051360#p2051360

Lyrics -
Chorus (Triple93)
Hey the King is coming back so it's "Game Over!"
It don't matter bout your raps nah it's "Game Over!"
You got a thousand fans to clap? It's still "Game Over!"
You say your names up on the map? Well it's "Game Over!"
(X2)

Verse 1 (Triple93)
Uh, so you got a lot of nice clothes
-You got some tight flows, you make that dice roll

You're sayin Christ's old "He don't know what I know"
Your heart is ice cold let me see the mic bro

It doesn't matter if you got fame or a big long chain that you're making it hang
You're changing the game you be claimin the king, thinkin' that Christ aint' saying a thang

Cuz your spreading your name ahead of them lames I really hope that you're ready for pain
I know someone who died for the spot, you're not a king cuz you're runnin' the block

Something your not, the Son of my God the only one that's making it rock
Your hearts gonna stop if you star in the plot I don't know who you are but He's marking His shot

-All these people thinkin' that they rhyme tough
-Well it's time up your sin is gonna find ya

And fine ya, Tell Jay he ain't Jay-hovah
-You are just a man and when you die you'll lay open

Imma stay flowin, I pray that you know Him
Cuz Christ is coming back and after that it's game over!


Verse 2 (737)
Uh huh,
Hello! How ya doin? gotta PSA up on my mind,
hope you gotta second let me try and put you in His mind
I don't know what you heard, but I'm fin to bring the Word, unleash up on these tracks,
anyone ever told you what happens in the after life when Christ come back?
you don't wanna hear that though - no - beats by dre in your ear
but to be in the clear, gotta put faith in the Son, you saying chill,
buying up the mall, spending paychecks
swagger turned up, rollin' maybachs
living for the moment, yolo, created for mo tho,
His image implanted in you like a chip so pause like a photo
What will it profit you if you gain everything
in the end, lose your soul, as you bow before the King (nothing)
house up on the beach, you live in the air
while you don't recognize God gave you every breathe of air
leanin with your cup, while you take a sip
but when He come's back It's still Lil Flip (game over)

[Eedee]

Beat: This was nice, upbeat and inspirational. I liked it.

Lyrics: Your's were nice. I really enjoyed your rhyme schemes. You're getting better!! 737, I didn't like that much. He basically bit Drake and rhymed YOLO with photo with no elongated schemes to go with it. Meh...

Mixing: As always, nothing to complain about here. It was awesome. Keep it up.

Delivery: Both of you had nice delivery getting your point across. Excellent job.

Great song; looking forward to the mixtape!

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man!

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Damn sick beat and sick album cover!!

Flow was pretty good on this, I like your lyrics a lot, I think with this being the "defining song" you should have done it solo, another verse from you would have been perfect. your rhyming has gotten a lot better and flow and delivery is really good.
737, try and rhyming more syllables even if its not that noticeable it will help the whole piece a lot, I think the middle was the strongest point for you, still pretty good though, nice track!

Keep it up!

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks for the feedback man! The reason this is my defining track and I have 737 on it is because he is a pretty big artist. He has worked with dudes from Lecrae's camp

[Vettori]

I don't have a lot to critique, It's on point and you obviously have the recording experience,
The beats cool, but has a typical sound to it.

I liked your verse better second dude has potential, but some of the content was meh. Maybe if he switched up his flow or tempo at which he raps every once in a while. it could keep the ear interested.
I like the song. But miught not find it on repeat. The beat has a vibe that I can only fuck with for a little while...
Hope to hear some more material soon

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks man! It's good to hear that you like my verse more and that my quality can keep up with his. I recorded mine in my dorm room and mixed it myself - 737 recorded his at a professional studio

[Ticalrecords]

ay bruh why you delete the page?

[TripleNineThree]

What page did I delete?? PM me.. I didn't delete any page..

[Ticalrecords]

loll dope song bruh, your flow is on point as always. nothing really to critique. the second guy was sick too. the production was nice and so was the mixing. this is a good title song for a mixtape.

mind checking mine out? its called AhdduB - One Last PSA

[Dlovetv]

This was a dope song.
I cant find anything bad to be honest, Flow, Delivery, Mixing, Beat, Lyrics, everything sounded great

Check me out when you get a chance,
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