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Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby Vettori » Nov 30th, '12, 00:42

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=150652 <--- Link to feed

http://soundcloud.com/daniel-king-23/ve ... nightmares

recorded this this morning. It's my favourite to date. Thank you for taking time to listen :D
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby TripleNineThree » Nov 30th, '12, 01:17

Saw that you sent me this in a message. I'll be sure to give you some feed - hopefully by later tonight when I'm done with homework (I got a lot)
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby DƎRDYPK » Nov 30th, '12, 01:24

good stuff, only suggestion is you should put more layers in your verses.
it would bring out alot more power in your final mix :b:
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby Vettori » Nov 30th, '12, 01:41

Iv'e been trying to keep it natural for the chance I preform them. I want it to sound as much like myself as possible. But I definately Agree :D. ty for the listen :D
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby TripleNineThree » Nov 30th, '12, 03:48

The beat starts out sick. I love that deep and serious feel to it... then the hook comes in and WOW. That hook is sick!!!! Something that you would hear on a hit song

Wow... I'm not sure if I've heard your music before but your style is sick. I love the way you combine rapping with singing somewhat like what Drake does but your style is original. I really can't knock anything about this. I'm a perfectionist when it comes to mixing and that's what I notice the most in songs. For the most part your mixing is quite good but there are some things you could add to make it sound more professional and full such as addlibs and echoes in the right spots. To be honest, I love mixing people's music. If you're interested, send me a message and I'll mix some of this song just to see if you like what I do. I really like this song though, from the message to delivery and your flow (your great at singing) it's great.

Keep it up bro, keep me posted on any new songs you come out with! :y:

Do you mind returning the feed? viewtopic.php?f=38&t=151202
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Nov 30th, '12, 07:02

wow this was really great! definitely one of the top on TR shady! Lyrics were great along with everything else ! nothing to complain about nice job!
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby Vettori » Nov 30th, '12, 22:41

thank you guys very much, It makes me so proud ot hear all this. I'll pm You Triple
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby SajN » Nov 30th, '12, 23:04

I still love your song 'Under My Skin' or something. Shame I don't have it anymore :/
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby Vettori » Nov 30th, '12, 23:09

HAHA Your awesome man :) Even though I look back at them and dislike them. It was a point in time for me, so it has to have had relevance. I appreciate it :)
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby Vettori » Nov 30th, '12, 23:10

btw its on myspace, but dont allow it to become alive haha .... I'm a new man :D
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby Boston617 » Dec 1st, '12, 19:34

i understand the fact u wana sound more like urself more but u cuda layed some other shit more you know.
its a dope song, the singing shit worked out good on it but some of it coulded of been layered. but thats really the only complaint i got that if u cud even call it that.
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby Tash8 » Dec 2nd, '12, 08:00

how come i can't download it?
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby Eedee » Dec 2nd, '12, 08:24

Damn, that was dope.

Loved the multis and the quality! Great mixing.

Not much else to say, I definitely was feeling this, dude.
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby Vettori » Dec 2nd, '12, 15:57

tyvm guys :) I understand that layering would of been a great add, but I had a limited amount of time to record, and Literally finished when My time was up. Currently have my equipment set up at a friends.. So I don't have the luxery of recording whenever I want to.

And I'm not sure where the download option is on soundcloud. I actually havn't been able to locate one myself. I may have to upload it to my hulkshare, so that can be fixed..again thanks guys for checking it out :D
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Re: Vettori- Beautiful Nightmares

Postby ray k-47 » Dec 2nd, '12, 16:17

This is nice i like the beat and hook alot
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