AhdduB - One Last PSA

[Ticalrecords]

LOF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=151206


what do ya think? loll


https://soundcloud.com/ahddub/one-last-psa


again, fuck writing the lyrics out, thats a step backwards foreal

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks for the feed on my track man!

I like the way it starts. It has an old school type feeling to it which I enjoy and your talking works good on the intro. The beat comes in pretty sick with a lot of energy and I think you match it. What you need some practice doing is your mixing. I can't understand some of the lyrics because the track isn't mixed the best. Your delivery and flow is really good though. You don't have a monotone voice and your delivery is quite interesting. I like the way you talk in the middle of it, it works good and I like your voice when you're talking.

Solid track, keep it up bro!

[Ticalrecords]

ahhhhhh, hahaha yo foreal is that mixing really holding me back? i mean we've all heard of ppl recording songs in their mop closet and getting numbers on youtube - they have just as shitty a mic as i do. i always assumed a mic is a mic and it would pick everything up regardless... i'm just not sure what the mixing does aside from the obvious making the vocals louder, wetter and meshing it into the beat... idk, is it in the mixing that can cover all that..."amatuer-ness" for lack of a better word? i'm asking, cuz ur stuff doesn't seem to have that problem. i can tell when something is mixed BADLY, but i can't tell if a song is mixed good, decent, or great yk what i mean? loll. i use Pro Tools. if you have any pointers, they'd be greatly appreciated

and i'm glad you liked the song

[Willy]

Pretty dope, I like your voice and you know how to write, but definitely turn your vocals up. I had the same problem as TripleNineThree.

[Ticalrecords]

thanks man, yea i will def work on that mixing

[TripleNineThree]

There's actually A LOT that goes into mixing and making a track sound professional. I don't use ProTools, I use an $80 program called Mixcraft which would really well in my opinion and based off of the feedback I've gotten from others - it makes my tracks sound very professional. I don't have a great mic - I record with a $200 mic and use a $100 pre-amp; nothing spectacular.

I actually posted a thread on mixing and getting your vocals to sound better, you can check it out here! - viewtopic.php?f=74&t=147184

I'm a perfectionist when it comes to mixing music which is why that's the main thing I'm able to give feed on in someone else's track

Also, if you want, you can send me your vocals as an acapella file and your instrumental as a separate file and I'll show you the difference mixing makes, my email is tripleninethree@gmail.com

[Ticalrecords]

dude i don't doubt you, so hell yea man, only problem is that it is Finals Week here at my university, but i will squeeze in a second to record a bullshit freestyle or something loll. i'll def send you the tracks by the end of today.

i looked at ur thread, ima dl that mixcraft free version and try fucking with it.

[Ticalrecords]

@tripleninethree and WilyMo, could yall point out where i slur my words? it would really help me out

[313Relapse]

Thanks for the feed on my other song man, your voice is sounding better and as always i have nothing bad to say about your lyrics. You definitely have your own unique delivery the only thing that might need some work is the fact that you almost slur/stumble over certain words but i think it might just be your voice, either way it's barely noticeable. Overall good track, keep up the good work

[Ticalrecords]

thanks man, i appreciate the listen. could u listen one more time and tell me which parts i stumble at? you could give me the surrounding words/phrases or even better the actual time on the track. if its not too much trouble, it would really help me out

[Dlovetv]

I think the vocals need to be louder, especially when you rap over another artists beat, especially a popular beat, helps the audience pay attention to you rather than hear the JayZ lyrics in his head, as I'm doing now...
I can tell the vocal quality is good..just needs to be louder.

Your next song just started playing...your delivery sounds very sarcastic in both, If its supposed to be angry, GET FUCKING ANGRY..lol, if they are both to sound like that then my apologies.


check out my verse when u get a chance
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=151577

[Ticalrecords]

nah bruh, i'm not an angry person loll. but thanks for teh feedback