Eedee - "Don't Look Now" ft. Mat Demaz & Mike Murdoch

[Eedee]

MIXED BY MAT DEMAZ

*Produced by Smoke
*Second single from Phoenix. Coming early January.

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[Verse 1: Eedee]
College kid in his dorm skipping classes,
Writing rhymes schemes and kicking asses.
I promised this bitch I'd be back, check it,
I may rap messy but I won't come in second.
The weather is cold, yo, homie I won't show,
Any remorse because knowing my flow's gold
Is what keeps me stone cold froze in the snow,
Eedee's the man that you're hoping to know.
I fight this... give the soldier his dough,
It's gonna be okay because he told me it's so.
But now I've chosen to go places undreamt,
But in my dreams I see the faces unkempt.
Distorted in pain, the images haunt me,
Got my battle cry but they limit the army.
I'm really fucking sick of this fucking abuse,
I'ma keep doing what I do cuz I have nothing to lose.

[Chorus: Mike Murdoch]
Well, don't look now,
My head's up in the clouds and I don't plan on coming down...
Well, don't look now,
Your girlfriend's tongue in my mouth on our way back to my house...

[Verse 2: Mat Demaz]
Don't look now man because it's fucking too late
I don't want anything to do with the new problems you make
I'm not the man I used to be sometimes people do change
now I'm over your head bitch so cry me a blue lake
full of crocodile tears I won't snap if you don't provoke me
I used to be a slave to your bullshit but now I broke free
all of these whores that cut me off want me back oh please
I'm on a new level now why don't you go read
my lyrics don't treat me like a joke you fucken dumb fags
fuck you whore yeah I saw you hanging with some lads
people really piss me off I wish I could lunge at
the people that made me this fucked up I'm not bad I'm just mad
why do you think each time I'm on a tape I destroy a track
I really wish my life was better but fuck that
if it wasn't for torment I wouldn't be the crap
the beast in me all these other posers are wack

[Verse 3: Eedee]
Don't look now but I'm on the come up,
Devoted my craft, frickin' all the summer.
So when I fall, I can spring back up,
In the wintertime thinking that this rap sucks.
I can ignore the voices, that wriggle and writhe,
In the humorous agony, they giggle and scream.
But this is a dream, my eyes awaken,
Don't look now cuz it's time to take this!

[Verse 3: Mat Demaz]
everyone is falling apart starting to shart
where's the heart it's dead with this art
why is everything dying no more happiness just lying
I can't comprehend the time I've spent on my knee crying
I won't stay in a slump I need to get back up
kick life in the cunt and go and sit up front
it's time we increase the love in these streets
we'll ignore the stupidity grasp the wealth and be free

[PAINKILLƎR]

Who posts new music late at night? smh, Imma listen, go to sleep, listen again and give you feedback tomorrow.

[Eedee]

I wanted to release it the 23rd and it's 15 minutes to it and I'm tired, so fuck outta here.

Love you, man.

[mdemaz]

I fucking murdered that song; I don't care what any faggot says.

#EemazMob

Good hook, epic verses.

Motherfucking hip-hop, bitches.

[SliK]

Time to kick life in the cunt

[Eedee]

^ I like how you think.

[SliK]

It's such a crude way to say something so positive. The phrasing is really comical.

[Eedee]

For sure haha

[mdemaz]

Seriously though, this was alright.
Some parts where the vocals fade out are annoying, but it couldn't be helped.

Not bad.

I really wanna do some clean vocal stuff with Eedee later rapping like this because when I rap with this microphone with slammed vocals, it sounds really fucking weird.

Only the parts where I raised my voice sounded good.

Eedee's verses are solid; there's nothing much I can bitch about like a nitpicking cunt nugget; so, I won't bother.

Mike really came through with the hook.

That's all there is to say, really.

Solid.

[Ticalrecords]

loll it was nice, was the hook pre made or do yall know Mike Murdoch? either way i liked it. the beat was pretty damn nice too. Demaz, sometimes you get mush mouthed but your def coming along. Eedee, if you say your flow is dope one more time... loll nah fuck it i don't have a leg to stand on either, i'm just saying.
anyways, its a cool song, i'm guessing the production and hook is original, so thats something. the mixing was damn straight too, what program do u use?


btw i have a song posted just now, called Westside Story Remix, i'd love yalls feedback on it

[TripleNineThree]

Currently at work, I'll feed this when I get home!

EDIT - Here we go!

1st Verse - Sick. Haha. Eedee you've been improving A LOT. Your verse is sick. From the mixing, to flow, to delivery, to lyrics it is all solid. Goodjob man

Hook - The hook is pretty good. The mixing is different but I think it sounds good. There's a lot of echoes and reverbs but it helps to make it more full.

2nd verse - This is a good verse demaz, it's an improvement from your other stuff. The only problem that I have is that it's hard to understand what you're saying. The delivery is good because of the emotion but it sounds like your yelling so much that I can't understand what you're saying. The only other thing I could knock a little bit is your lyrics, for the most part they are pretty basic. Maybe it's just because I'm comparing them to Eedee's and he's always a beast with multis

3rd verse - Same as 1st verse. The overdubbs on the end of your verses are mixed REALLY good. Goodjob on the mixing Demaz, the second half of verse 3 sounds good too. Like I said before, your flow and delivery is down good but your pronunciation of the words could be better.


Overall, solid track!

[Eedee]

@Tical - Yeah, Mike is one of my friends. And I'll feed it soon.

@Triple - Thanks, man! I'm very happy with how we both performed on this track. Mike really destroyed that hook too!

[PAINKILLƎR]

Great track, although Eedee's verse could've had more multis tbh I'm kidding, good stuff

[Mr.DGAF]

Eedee, you've improved a ton since we first started working together. There's a lot more confidence in your voice now, and the flow is so much better. There's a lot of complex variation from you now with flow and it makes the songs so much more unique. Your verse here was one of your best audio wise, and the best on the song. There was one part where the echo on your voice sounded a bit too loud and it made some of the lyrics hard to understand, but no biggie.

Mikes hook was good too. The guy can definitely sing, but his vocals are still a bit raw. The effects on his voice for this chorus kind of helped that, but his potential is amazing. I think his hook on your next single is bombastic.

Demaz, your verse was really good. I was a bit surprised actually, the flow and delivery were on point. You just gotta work on enunciation more. It was kinda hard understanding all of your lyrics, but the flow and delivery make it more than listenable. Also, your mixing on this track is awesome. Since you've started mixing eedee's stuff, it's had a more professional sound to it.

Good track guys, and look out for the next single. That shits beyond dope.