Close My EyesWell.. You already know what I think about your lyrics on all your tracks lol. I already heard this song but I'll leave some feedback. I really enjoyed both your and precison's deliveries and flows. You were on beat the entire time. The only thing I can knock is that I think there is too much bass in your voice.. it doesn't sound as professional as it could sound, but, other than that, the mixing is really good.
Precision does a great job, I'm still amazed that he's only been rapping for a little bit. He stayed on beat the entire time. My only complaint is that his flow was basically the same the entire verse, it makes it somewhat boring without any type of flow change up but it's good.
LightsOnce again, love the singing in the beginning to open the track. Wow, Precision sounds much better on this song, the mixing on the vocals are better on this song than "Close My Eyes" maybe it's because your voices are better for this song. "But my heart's been removed, I'm an amputee," -lolwut? I laughed at this line.. I think it was cheesy lol but no big deal. The mixing on the "Lights.. in my head" part sounded weird to me.. I'm not sure why. Overall, this is a solid song. I like how you guys rap back and forth on it.
Give me the RushAlready fed this track on TR I think so you know what i feel about this song - it's dope.
Broken FreeWow.. Murdock kills every hook. His singing is great. I think the mixing could be better. It sounds like there's too much reverb to me, it pushes his voice too much into the background. I think you stay on beat this entire song but the beat is really weird.. The beginning of the first verse sounds really off but i don't think it is. I just don't think I'm use to you flowing like that. I'm more use to you having faster verses so it sounds weird to me but it's a solid track.
ShadowsAmazing mixing, wow. Haha just kidding but you already know what I think of this track.
It's TrueChorus sounds really weird on this track.. Not a big fan of the hook. The verses sound sick though - Once again, I like the effect of you and Precision going back and forth. So.. almost every song so far has been a love song :P The fact that it's like you and precision arguing is pretty cool, good concept. Precision's flow sounds really choppy on this track.. I think it's because the beat is so slow. You have great emotion though.
Rise AboveBeat is sick. Sounds like something Eminem would spit to. "Go ahead, call me a fat white kid
That's depressed, now watch my music be timeless." that part sounded off beat. I love the emotion that comes in on this song, wow! Even though this is short, this goes hard. I love it
No One LaughsI mixed this so... You know what I think about it. Not a big fan of Precision's verse content wise :P but other than that, it's a solid track. Both of you guys do pretty good jobs.
I need a Doctor remixPrecision did his best job on this song I think. His lyrics and flow are really solid. I enjoy the punchins, they sound good. The part where he starts rapping fast a tiny bit I think sound off though. His second verse is also solid, it's nice a personal. The beat sounds like it's low quality.. did you download it off YouTube? It sounds off cuz it's low quality but your vocals are high quality so it sounds off. I like how your part comes in. Your delivery is really good, i love the emotion in your voice on every track. Nothing to complain about on your verse besides the quality difference once again between the beat and your vocals.
These StreetsVocals are too loud for this beat in my opinion. Also, there's too much bass in your voice for this beat or maybe I just think that because of how loud the vocals are compared to the beat. This song has really good imagery, good job on the lyrics. Flow, delivery is all on point.
FinallyOnce again, I mixed this so you know what I think. This is one of my favorite songs on this tape.
Solid job man, I'm pumped to hear what Phoenix is gonna sound like!
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