New song - dangerous place

[FxTDilz]

This is my song Dangerous Place mixed by the forums own EeDee :P haha check it out and give feedback?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tO1qnri-M5Y

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[FxTDilz]

oh shit i forgot bout that rule, viewtopic.php?f=38&t=153866

[Eedee]

I mixed this the best I could, to be honest. I added some panned layers after compression/normalizing and some reverb and whatnot. In no way am I a professional mixer but I like how it came out, tbh.

As for your lyrics, they're really deep and thoughtful and your rhyming is pretty cool as well. I hear lots of multis. The only thing I'd say is tighten up your flow. You're on beat, but the way you package your delivery around the snares is really weird to me lol. Nothing practice can't fix though.

I like the song!

[Ticalrecords]

you got your flow ALMOST there. tighten it up ever so slightly and youll be good. a few times you put alot of words into ur bars and it doesn't sound AS good as it should. might be one or two syllables too many. but good stuff man keep it up.


mind critiquing mine? just posted it, its called AhdduB - LFT Intro

[FxTDilz]

thanks bro, and yea im quite bad with craming to many words into a sentence but im tryna work on that

[mdemaz]

I can mix some stuff for you if you want, just hit me up, brah.

You from NZ?

I went on holiday there a while ago.

Like I said on the other thread, just focus on flowing better, your delivery is actually pretty good, just practice riding the beat better.

[Eedee]

I can mix some stuff for you if you want, just hit me up, brah.

You from NZ?

I went on holiday there a while ago.

Like I said on the other thread, just focus on flowing better, your delivery is actually pretty good, just practice riding the beat better.

Yeah, Demaz will probably mix way better than I can lol. He's a near pro, fo'real.