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Cryptic - Wyvern Prod. SkitzOBeatz

Postby 313Relapse » Mar 9th, '13, 00:33

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https://soundcloud.com/cryptic6/cryptic-wyvern

Recently I've been busy but I've finally gotten the time to put out a solo track, it's my first completed solo track to date so this ones a bit of a big deal to me. Let me know what you think all feedback is appreciated and leave a link if you'd like me to return the favor i'd be more than happy to! :smoking:
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Re: Cryptic - Wyvern Prod. SkitzOBeatz

Postby 313Relapse » Mar 18th, '13, 16:03

Anyone?
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Postby Eedee » Mar 18th, '13, 23:42

You seem to have the idea of flow down. I felt the flow was pretty cool, but you did pause in some spots where they sound awkward, if that makes sense.

Lyrics were good too, I heard some solid multis throughout.

Adlibs were mixed well, the different mixing on the other "vocals" (adlibs) sounded nice.

The only thing I can say is that the beat overrides your voice throughout a lot. Just make sure the volume is all nice and everything.

You don't have to feedback, but if you'd at least listen and tell me what you thought on my EP? Thanks! viewtopic.php?f=38&t=155545
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Re: Cryptic - Wyvern Prod. SkitzOBeatz

Postby 313Relapse » Mar 19th, '13, 16:43

Thanks man, ive been getting mixed feedback on the volume levels depending on the speakers/ headphones there played through.. it might be a pproblem with the instrumental but i dont know enough about them to be sure. i really appreciate the feedback though, ill be sure to return the favour on your ep when get enough time to thourouhly listen start to finish
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Postby Solace » Mar 24th, '13, 17:58

I actually can't point out any major flaws in here, it was cool and the production was dope as fuck. I like your flow a lot and I think you'll be able to do a lot with it in the future. I'd like to hear more from you in the future :y:
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Postby 313Relapse » Mar 24th, '13, 18:17

Thanks for the feedback man i'm glad you liked it. I'll be sure to stay more active here in the future
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