Eedee ft. Yamwise - "I'm Through" [Single]

[Eedee]

LoF

*First single off my new "The Epiphany EP", due out within the next two weeks.
*Produced by the guy on the second verse whose production name is YamJamz. He also mixed it.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nkhbuJa5 ... e=youtu.be
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[Verse 1: Eedee]
I'm the best in my town, the Godzilla of Wasilla
Flex and you frown, you got feelings, you are little
Next to the ground, walk with us and talk bitches
I feel death and it drowns, saw fishes and attention
Deficit, I'm next to it, talk shit and I'm hurt
My lyrics impact more than the Titanic and icebergs.
I'm quite certain too, those are nice curtains
Compared to you, fucker, I'm a gargantuan size person.
You're going soft and I flex, better drop to the deck
Cuz when it's all said and done, it's off with your neck.
That's just a front I put up to make sure I can't be touched
But all these fucking questions nag at me, the answers up.
So I lift up my chin and take a look in the sky
And somehow I feel a spirit looking down into my eyes
I feel there's a disguise and it slips and I'm exposed
But the trick that I have known leaves me quick and now I go

[Chorus: Eedee]
Everytime I go outside, I feel it closing in
Just going 'bout my life and Hell, I know it is
Gonna end sometime, what the hell can I do?
Everyone can die too, so fuck it all, I'm through. (x2)

[Verse 2: Eedee]
But when I tune out the noise, about the flavor of life
And with these dangerous eyes I scout the blanket of night.
And everyone around me seems like they're aggressive
I'm trying to get my point across twice in a message.
And I saw that you read it, but no reply was in order
I put in for a passport to fly for the border.
To jump start my career, as I fight off the fame
I'll need both of my hands so I hand the mic off to Yames.

[Verse 2: Yamwise]
Yo I be failin' at failin' I'm fallin' asleep peep this
Me and Eedee eat it no Eden better off on the deep end
preachers weepin' scars that'll leave you speechless
but it's all just part of the way that the reapers got you thinkin'
im just sayin' that i gotta get awayin '
fly to better day before I rot and decay and
sometimes things are simpler when you
start over again

[Verse 3: Eedee]
A long time ago there was a man in his seat
Overlooking progress, he was managing me.
I was skinned to the bone like some cannibal meat,
But somehow I'm able still just to stand on my feet.
The table will break if the dancin' is free,
I promised me a diet but I flatten the deed.
My forest of hope's gone, savagin' trees
So long to the wrong road, hand me the keys.
I'm just a normal guy that you stab and I bleed,
This life I seem to live I never had in my dreams.
I'm learning to ride on, I land with a scream
I'm wrong to think the help will come; bandage my knees.
My breath's still numb, I'm havin' a leave,
From the distraction we call life and the cancer in me
Seems to damage the weak, now I'm travellin' seas
And my problems outnumber all the sand on a beach.

[PAINKILLƎR]

Good track Eedee. The lyrics were dope, rhyming was dope, the flow seemed a bit off at times but it was good and progressively got better.

My breath's still numb, I'm havin' a leave,
From the distraction we call life and the cancer in me
Seems to damage the weak, now I'm travellin' seas
And my problems outnumber all the sand on a beach.

2dope4me.

Good track, have heard better from you doe.

[Mr.DGAF]

I kinda disagree, I think this is one of your best pieces yet.

First of all, the quality alone is awesome. Your voice sounds clear, I already told you to tell Yam he did an amazing job mixing this haha. Speaking of Yam, he did a nice job on the second verse. Very catchy and fit well. I think his vocals could be just a tad louder but that's me.

Your flow on the first few bars of verse one was amazing. Combined with your seemingly more confident delivery, it was a noticeable improvement even from recent tracks. I can't really complain about anything on this, I liked most all of it man. Maybe try to polish your flow just a little bit more but it's improving a lot.

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Wait.. wait.. wait... did I miss Phoenix?

[PAINKILLƎR]

Wait.. wait.. wait... did I miss Phoenix?

Nope, Phoenix is just going through it's Detox phase.

[Eedee]

Wait.. wait.. wait... did I miss Phoenix?

Nah. That's coming out next month. Just putting out a small little EP in between.

[Block]

Hmm.. Your voice is so fucking scarily similar to a friend of mine.

You've gotten much better since the last stuff I've heard from you. The mixing is good as well. Your flow slips up in some points, but nothing drastic. My only quarrel is that all I hear is Cleaning Out My Closet on this song, lol. The entire style of the song.

Sick beat also. Good shit man.

[Eedee]

Thanks for the feed, man!

Haha, really? I'd have to go listen to CoMC again and compare.

[kennethk]

LoF

*First single off my new "The Epiphany EP", due out within the next two weeks.
*Produced by the guy on the second verse whose production name is YamJamz. He also mixed it.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nkhbuJa5 ... e=youtu.be
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[Verse 1: Eedee]
I'm the best in my town, the Godzilla of Wasilla
Flex and you frown, you got feelings, you are little
Next to the ground, walk with us and talk bitches
I feel death and it drowns, saw fishes and attention
Deficit, I'm next to it, talk shit and I'm hurt
My lyrics impact more than the Titanic and icebergs.
I'm quite certain too, those are nice curtains
Compared to you, fucker, I'm a gargantuan size person.
You're going soft and I flex, better drop to the deck
Cuz when it's all said and done, it's off with your neck.
That's just a front I put up to make sure I can't be touched
But all these fucking questions nag at me, the answers up.
So I lift up my chin and take a look in the sky
And somehow I feel a spirit looking down into my eyes
I feel there's a disguise and it slips and I'm exposed
But the trick that I have known leaves me quick and now I go

[Chorus: Eedee]
Everytime I go outside, I feel it closing in
Just going 'bout my life and Hell, I know it is
Gonna end sometime, what the hell can I do?
Everyone can die too, so fuck it all, I'm through. (x2)

[Verse 2: Eedee]
But when I tune out the noise, about the flavor of life
And with these dangerous eyes I scout the blanket of night.
And everyone around me seems like they're aggressive
I'm trying to get my point across twice in a message.
And I saw that you read it, but no reply was in order
I put in for a passport to fly for the border.
To jump start my career, as I fight off the fame
I'll need both of my hands so I hand the mic off to Yames.

[Verse 2: Yamwise]
Yo I be failin' at failin' I'm fallin' asleep peep this
Me and Eedee eat it no Eden better off on the deep end
preachers weepin' scars that'll leave you speechless
but it's all just part of the way that the reapers got you thinkin'
im just sayin' that i gotta get awayin '
fly to better day before I rot and decay and
sometimes things are simpler when you
start over again

[Verse 3: Eedee]
A long time ago there was a man in his seat
Overlooking progress, he was managing me.
I was skinned to the bone like some cannibal meat,
But somehow I'm able still just to stand on my feet.
The table will break if the dancin' is free,
I promised me a diet but I flatten the deed.
My forest of hope's gone, savagin' trees
So long to the wrong road, hand me the keys.
I'm just a normal guy that you stab and I bleed,
This life I seem to live I never had in my dreams.
I'm learning to ride on, I land with a scream
I'm wrong to think the help will come; bandage my knees.
My breath's still numb, I'm havin' a leave,
From the distraction we call life and the cancer in me
Seems to damage the weak, now I'm travellin' seas
And my problems outnumber all the sand on a beach.

You did really good on this, I feel as if the mix was done well, emotion was there nice flow as well, hope to hear more from yeah. Haven't heard someone as well as you around here in a while.

[King Bullet]

I like your voice,you put a lot of emotion in your music. Flow is on spot,although there is a point or two where it kinda felt a bit stretched.but no biggy. xD Lyrics are deep and genuine,can feel what you're sayin'. Only thing I didn't like that much was the beat,sounded too simple. My opinion is if you had done this on a better beat it would be a flawless track. And the hook needs a bit of that harsh voice you did on couple of spots through the verses. Your homie also did a great job,sound is clear and coherent. Keep up the good work homie!