Dilz - Runaway Love Remix

[FxTDilz]

I made this song after listening to the original version, it just inspired me. Its a very deep song but please check it out and let me know what you guys think??

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BxI7bFpmue4

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[Trimss]

This was deep, yeah. Sometimes I feel like your bars are too long or something because you have to rush your ending rhymes. However, I still liked it. Your vocals were weirdly mixed though.

Keep up. Where are you from? UK? Australia? Your accent doesn't seem really american.

[FxTDilz]

algood bro, i realise i did that in a few places but im still fully happy with the song lol. im from New Zealand

[Eedee]

Powerful song, great story-telling and imagery.

Only thing that bothers me is the rushing of certain bars to cram in your end rhymes. Throws off the flow.

[FxTDilz]

thanks bro

[Ticalrecords]

sometimes i think you tried rushing the flow but for the most of the time you were riding the beat well. pronunciation could be improved ever so slightly - every once in a while you slur, but its not too bad. overall pretty nice. I thought this was gonna be a remix to Kanye's Runaway loll.

mind checking mine out? it doesn't have any responses yet. its called One Day Remix

[FxTDilz]

thanks for the feedback bro, nah not the biggest fan of kanyes one lol. but yea the feedback means alot
yup will go have a look now