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One Day Remix

Postby Ticalrecords » Mar 20th, '13, 04:24

POF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=155089


this is my remix to UGK's One Day. here are the lyrics too. the second verse is...ignant to say the least loll. tell me what yall think!!


http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/one-day-remix

I smoke a lot of weed – I know it aint good for me
Every girl I see - either too hot or too butch for me
They all got an agenda – oh yea so organized
Hated cliques since high school – fuck a social life
Jacob grimm’s social ladder – a fairytale of acceptance
the real story is too morbid to read to kids and I guess its/
Just Way it goes play it so off – I must be on to something ,right?
Nothing, never mind I get the rhyme whether I like it or not,
I’d like to actually learn something insightful
About what my subconscious is trying to tell me when I get in this mic booth
All I know – is stay true – there is no one you need to play to
cuz they aint you – all the rest of them are take twos
truly - that’s why one day I’ll have to smoke ahdduB
been take one – since day one – make my money and fucking run!/
haha and when it happens like that,

uh uh uh I’m A to the B –
one day my CD will have that backwards E
hey false promo – big no no
YOLO – live my life like Glenn Coco
I don’t give a Fuck – act like you weren’t told so
so when the popo have me captured
and make me spell the alphabet backwards
I go from G straight to E – like why even try phasing me?
Got a vein full of H – that’s shameful to say
but I call the shots - ten eighth balls a day
a dead man walking – and Sean aint Penned shit so I'm still talking
I’m more Daulton than Spicolli to yall
nah I JK – and I’m still Rowling Biatch!
hell yea - smoke an fat L with EM N O – no?
ah I gotta pee – and I bet that’s my cue to go
R – yall shocked I got an S on my chest
blue jeans white T – in the mirror I’m like daaaamn
yall see me shining - under the UV
rumors of a humor darker than AhdduB's? we'll soon see
sue me, I was so drunk I was seeing doubles of you
meet my Ex karma – yea I got nothing to lose
but why oh why – can’t I ever catch some Z’s?
could it be nightmares of you fucks sleeping on me!
I just won – you two – we should have a threesome
What for? – a high five from my homies of course
Six six six – oh I found my nihilist heaven
Like george costanza – I’ma name my son seven!
magic eightball told me hoard bombs swords and nines
but I just asked if I'd wife a dime before I die
fuck it - I know to quit when I find myself ahead and
If I keep going I’ll end up working nights at 7/11
Hahahaha – 2012
Please please - let me out of this hell!
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Re: One Day Remix

Postby Ticalrecords » Mar 22nd, '13, 00:02

yo soundcloud tells me 3 ppl actually clicked on the song. come on yall
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Re: One Day Remix

Postby FxTDilz » Mar 23rd, '13, 06:09

think you should upload to youtube so people can just comment onto the video. i wasnt the biggest fan of your delivery but im sure if i listened to more of your tracks it would grow on me as swizZz did.
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Re: One Day Remix

Postby Ticalrecords » Mar 23rd, '13, 07:31

thanks for the feedback man, means alot. i will in a few months. tryna get a EP together first. btw who's SwizZz?
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Re: One Day Remix

Postby King Bullet » Mar 24th, '13, 14:21

Your flow is smooth and playing with your voice makes it catchy. Lyrics are dope,only thing you should do is record in a better studio or something and get a bit better mixing. Other than that it's all good,sounds new and fresh so keep doin' ya' thang boi! :)
At least I know that I don't know...question is: are you bozos smart enough to feel stupid?!-hope so!!!
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Re: One Day Remix

Postby Ticalrecords » Mar 24th, '13, 17:28

thanks for the listen man. yea im tryna work on my mixing skills smh loll
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Re: One Day Remix

Postby Ticalrecords » Mar 25th, '13, 09:00

thanks for the listen man. i got another song i posted recently that aint got feedback yet, i'd like ur opinion on that one. its been mixed differently
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