Cypher (Dark Wanderer, Apostolus, Sentus, Solace, Big Ax-D)

[Solace]

All TR members. It's old because we've been trying to get more people on it for a while but it fell through so I decided to release it anyway.

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Lyrics:
[Verse 1: Dark Wanderer]
Just a cold soul,
Getting pissed at my split personality, now he's chokin' his own throat,
You think you're dope bro?
Then come battle, I'll be on Crystal Lake with one paddle in a row boat,
Hoppin' on a track with Dark, that's a big mistake,
I'll supply the shovel dog, you can dig the grave,
Lyrical range rover, spiked wheels and mounted flamethrowers,
So it's game over if you're in my lane.

[Verse 2: Apostolus]
Listen to the rhymes that I'm spewing,
He said to get the mic you have to go through me....So I walked through him,
And left his organs on my skin like solar rays,
And his blood dripping from my motherfucking shoulder blades,
I write lines, You're slow to spark rhymes,
'Cause your plans backfired like Joan of Arc's spine,
I lift planets and crush 'em together,
One percent of my brain data for you is too much to remember.

[Chorus: Big Ax-D] x2
I know you're scared of me, you live a fantasy,
You cannot fuck with this (Oh no).
I know your eyes can see that you don't want to be,
Inside a ring with me (Oh no).

[Verse 3: Sentus]
I'm new to the game but I'm rockin' vets,
Put a boot to your frame and then stomp your chest,
Chillin' at the bottom of the Lochness depths,
Spitting rhymes in the cave that the monster slept,
You can't top these threats when I drop these threats,
More perfect than Ghandi's breath,
I'm the one thing that God regrets,
So I'm done ripping you tell Pac he's next.

[Verse 4: Solace]
(When you see me) Rapping a flow and I'm getting mad,
(On the TV) Gathering dough in a vicious rap,
(I am so beastly) Bantering hoes when I rip a track,
(No, it ain't easy) Smackin' a dome witta wicked knack,
When I rap on a mic it's like I'm jamming a spike,
Ravenous nights spent battling these amateur dykes,
Attack with a knife, I'm crackin' a life,
I'm ill though with a skilled flow damagin' sight, damn it I'm tight, right?

[Chorus: Big Ax-D] x2
I know you're scared of me, you live a fantasy,
You cannot fuck with this (Oh no).
I know your eyes can see that you don't want to be,
Inside a ring with me (Oh no).

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This was a good cypher. I really liked the intro leading up to it. First verse was good overall and i liked the second verse delivery energy and lyrics i didn't like the pause you ended your verse with though. I have to be honest i wasn't a huge fan of the chorus though it seemed a bit out of place for a cypher but it makes it unique. Sentus i've never heard you before but i liked your flow approach on this the most. layed back delivery too, my favorite verse on the cypher. Solace definitely had the most unique approach to this. Once you started really rappin hard half way through it really came together and you rod the beat perfectly there. Overall this is really good, quality on par for the most part and everyone brought something different to the track. I'll be sure to look out for more tracks in the future

[Solace]

I can't really say much else other than I really appreciate the input and I'm glad that you enjoyed it, so yeah, I do and I am.

[Eedee]

Willy had a good verse, lovin' the flow. Vocals felt a bit too low volume.

Apostolus had a cool verse too. His voice is the same on all his songs though, he sounds mush-mouthed a lot too.

I didn't like Sentus' verse. Just didn't feel right, especially the last few bars.

Solace had a cool verse, those punch-ins were interesting.

Big had a cool ass hook too.

[Mr.DGAF]

Favorite verse was Willy's, I love his delivery. I really hope you drop more man, this and the last thing you posted were awesome. You were indeed predisposed to be this cold.

Apostolus takes it for the hardest delivery though. That shit was intense. I think it was pulled off well on this track, didn't seemed forced or anything. Of course solid lyrics. Good shit even if it's old, I've heard some of his newer stuff on YT.

Sentus: I actually liked this verse. Hard to leave feed on it really, kinda short and concise. The flow, I will say, was awesome. The "Stop these threats" part especially.

Loved the punch ins on Solace's verse. I think the flow was a bit rushed on the "I am so beastly" line, I thought it coulda been like a syllable shorter.

Big Ax-D: Nice hook, I thought it fit well. Not much to say haha.

[Willy]

^Thanks man - I'm not too fond of this verse but I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on a song/video at the moment so you'll get to see my ugly in HD before too long.

Pretty cool turnout. Thought everyone did well n' shit.

[AbramIsaac]

You can tell class' part is old. He's progressed so far since then.

[Solace]

Willy had a good verse, lovin' the flow. Vocals felt a bit too low volume.

Blame me on that, lol.

Thank you Eedee, DGAF, and Abram for listening. It'd be appreciated if you shot any Youtube likes/support of some kind.

[Eedee]

Yeah I'll do that, Solace.

Mind checking out my EP too?

[Trimss]

Apostolus had a great verse. I didn't like the hook, even though usually Big Ax D drops great hooks. Like everyone had good verses.

I don't really like Sentus's voice but his verse is good too.

Solace I liked your approach, with the punch ins and stuff. It was original and it stood out. Is that an old verse or a new verse?

[Solace]

Yeah I'll do that, Solace.

Mind checking out my EP too?

Yeah yeah 'course, gimme a bit though. I'm tired and sick and just tryna relax rather than gather thoughts for a review.

Apostolus had a great verse. I didn't like the hook, even though usually Big Ax D drops great hooks. Like everyone had good verses.

I don't really like Sentus's voice but his verse is good too.

Solace I liked your approach, with the punch ins and stuff. It was original and it stood out. Is that an old verse or a new verse?

It actually feels old but now that I think of it, it was done in late ish Jan.

[Eedee]

Thanks

[Spyder]

willy was nice man, first time i think ive heard you on a track. voice kinda sounds the same as Class to me so that combo works. nothing really i can say here, decent verse.

anon needs to switch up that delivery a bit. dude has one emotion it seems like. some pronunciation issues made some words sound weird like "togetter" instead of together. but really just what i thought i would here from anon.

class has definitely improved his writing, felt like he was dragging some words out a bit awkwardly to hit the drum. other than that nothing too wrong.

sol you were the best imo. your voice has gotten nice, and that mixing classic as always. love the punch-ins as someone else mentioned. just solid work

ax did a nice hook, accent has cleared up a lot, was understandable and great sing songy hook as always.

[Solace]

Thanks Spyder

btw Class' verse is like 2 years old

[Spyder]

Ya I figured