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Tranquil - Back In The Day (Not Final)

Postby Tranquility » Apr 6th, '13, 05:32

Hey guys it has been Aaaaaaaaaaaages since I have been on this site, I use to have an account called "Tranquil" but it has been that long that I don't remember the email I used for it or the password, so I didn't see another option then to create a new one since I am finally back into music full focus!

This is a song that I am currently working on, this is just a snippet of the first verse, let me know what you guys think and any feedback would be appreciated :worship:

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=156074&p=2154192#p2154192

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4HT8y-rW ... e=youtu.be
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Re: Tranquil - Back In The Day (Not Final)

Postby Eedee » Apr 6th, '13, 08:30

I liked this. You had a great flow, rhyming was pretty solid too. The mix, as you said, isn't final, so I expect better :P

Haha, nah. This was laid-back and chill. I could feel the emotion.
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Re: Tranquil - Back In The Day (Not Final)

Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 7th, '13, 17:23

feelin the direction and subject matter of this..def need to hear a final mix though, sounds on point so far
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Re: Tranquil - Back In The Day (Not Final)

Postby Tranquility » Apr 8th, '13, 01:21

Cheers for the feedback. The song is complete now but I'll drop it later with a few other joints. Just wanted to release this so I can get a bit of feedback and what no :)
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Re: Tranquil - Back In The Day (Not Final)

Postby Chet Starr » Apr 8th, '13, 03:09

Great work man, I didn't expect such talent. I don't have any criticism, I'll make sure to listen to the final mix
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Re: Tranquil - Back In The Day (Not Final)

Postby Tranquility » Apr 9th, '13, 13:03

Thank you Chet Starr :)
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Re: Tranquil - Back In The Day (Not Final)

Postby Tranquil » Apr 12th, '13, 08:49

Bump. I also got my old account back :D
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Re: Tranquil - Back In The Day (Not Final)

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 12th, '13, 11:15

sweet flow man, been a while since I heard something from you and u still keep improving, good on ya!, Your mixing still needs some work, you are removing extreme many low frequencies from your vocal mix, u gotta mix it more gently and with more power on the botom end.

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Re: Tranquil - Back In The Day (Not Final)

Postby Francesco » Apr 12th, '13, 13:39

Good one! :y: Кееp on improving homie!
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Re: Tranquil - Back In The Day (Not Final)

Postby mpura » Apr 13th, '13, 18:51

this is pretty good man! keep up the good work :)
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Re: Tranquil - Back In The Day (Not Final)

Postby TripleNineThree » Apr 16th, '13, 02:52

I thought this was actually really good. You flowed to the beat really nicely and I don't think I really heard you slip up at all. I also like the message in the song about the direction hip-hop is currently going and the reminiscing feeling about "back in the day". This was a perfect beat for this type of track, I'm pumped to hear the song when you finish the whole thing! :y: :y:
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