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Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

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Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

Postby Eedee » Apr 18th, '13, 12:06

LoF

Link to the YouTube lyric video

Yes, this is from Phoenix. Which is coming out in the summer.

Hope you enjoy. If you don't get the song... first verse is my perspective, second verse is my ex-girlfriend's. :y:
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Re: Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

Postby FxTDilz » Apr 18th, '13, 14:06

awesome track, like i've said to you love the lyrics to the first verse and second verses delivery went with the beat real well. keep it up bro
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Re: Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

Postby TripleNineThree » Apr 18th, '13, 23:46

Quality sounds much better in this song than your others... It could just be the beat, your vocals sound really good. Obviously, your lyrics are dope as usual and your flow is on point throughout the entire song.

Something I've noticed in the mixing in most of your songs is that the overdubs on parts of the verse - I can tell you simply recorded over them and left the vocals like that. Be sure to zoom in on whatever program you use and match up the vocals so they are matched up perfectly or else it sounds less professional and sloppy on those parts.

The story telling in this song was great.
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Re: Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

Postby Eedee » Apr 19th, '13, 00:13

Thanks to both of you.

And yeah, once I get to Australia, recording those adlibs won't be a problem.
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Re: Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 19th, '13, 08:40

Damn man Mat Demaz is good with mixing vocals, props to him on that, and your voice, flow and delivery sounds good. I'm looking forward for that tape

the only suggestion I can give you is to make your voice more natural, because you high pitch it a bit and gives you a very young sound which is not generally appealing to the listeners, so try to be more smooth and deep.

but very nice track, and say whats up to Demaz for me

what's that about you going to Aussie land, where abouts?
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Re: Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

Postby Eedee » Apr 19th, '13, 09:48

Oh yeah, I feel you. At times I find myself rapping really high pitched like the SSLP-era and it pisses me off. Because my normal voice is very low-pitch and manly haha. But then I start rapping and it's fucking high. I need to train myself to rap and keep delivery but also make my voice sound natural.

Cheers for the feed, dude.
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Postby Francesco » Apr 19th, '13, 14:47

:y: Nice rhyming & good job overall!
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Re: Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

Postby Trimss » Apr 19th, '13, 20:57

I liked this.

You sound childish when you do that "angry" voice though. lol, but overall, this was good bro.
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Re: Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

Postby Eedee » Apr 19th, '13, 21:32

Trimss wrote:I liked this.

You sound childish when you do that "angry" voice though. lol, but overall, this was good bro.


You mean that growl on "Take me ONNNNN"? hahahaha :sweating:
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Re: Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

Postby Trimss » Apr 19th, '13, 21:47

Yeah haha. But it's okay, I see where yo'ure coming from. It just sounds really forced (no shit) in an awkward way.

Like I said, I still enjoyed the song.

And I never answered to your PM for some reason (I always forget to answer to PM's.) but yeah, I'll use your Hell On Earth verse. I had a verse, but ended up hating it so I rewrote another one. Sorry for the long wait, it'll be released soon (nodetox)
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Re: Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

Postby Eedee » Apr 19th, '13, 21:50

Trimss wrote:Yeah haha. But it's okay, I see where yo'ure coming from. It just sounds really forced (no shit) in an awkward way.

Like I said, I still enjoyed the song.

And I never answered to your PM for some reason (I always forget to answer to PM's.) but yeah, I'll use your Hell On Earth verse. I had a verse, but ended up hating it so I rewrote another one. Sorry for the long wait, it'll be released soon (nodetox)


Cool cool. Lookin' forward to hearin' it. :smoking:
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Re: Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

Postby Ticalrecords » Apr 22nd, '13, 02:32

i thought it was pretty good bruh. i have this beat too, you got it from Soundclick didnt ya loll. anyway you rode the beat very well and your delivery was nice. but like mentioned above there were parts where your voice went a lil high. its not really an issue, but if your tryna improve that's where you should focus on. anyways, good stuff
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Re: Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

Postby Eedee » Apr 22nd, '13, 02:37

Thanks, and yep. Got it from Soundclick lol
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Re: Eedee - "Both Sides" (Lyric Video)

Postby mdemaz » May 26th, '13, 11:01

Get on my level.

As for the song, if only the beat was yours, you probably could of made a fortune if this blew up.
This was almost flawless.

I wasn't a fan of those pauses you took in the second verse.
I probably should of edited that shit, but, no1curr.
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