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New song "On the edge" feat. Eedee and Mat Demaz

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Re: New song "On the edge" feat. Eedee and Mat Demaz

Postby Nick419 » May 2nd, '13, 19:04

Great track! I can tell you guys take your time when it comes to writing (multi's, matching syllables, etc.) I like that....hook was very fitting for this too. Only complaint I have (and its nothing extremely noticeable) but I feel like the beat slightly over powers the vocals on some parts. Which could either be the mixing or just the fact I'm listening on my laptop and not monitor speakers. Regardless, Great song!
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Re: New song "On the edge" feat. Eedee and Mat Demaz

Postby FxTDilz » May 2nd, '13, 23:49

thanks bro, glad you liked it :)
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Re: New song "On the edge" feat. Eedee and Mat Demaz

Postby Francesco » May 5th, '13, 01:13

:y: Nice...
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Re: New song "On the edge" feat. Eedee and Mat Demaz

Postby SliK » May 5th, '13, 01:24

Dilz your flow is awful. Just awful. Wayyy to many syllables in most of your lines.

Try to keep roughly the same amount of syllables per line because it doesn't matter if there is a multi a the end of every line when you're flowing so poorly. The content was good from all of you though.

Eedee your flow is actually good, props.

Not a bad chorus from Demaz either.
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Re: New song "On the edge" feat. Eedee and Mat Demaz

Postby Eedee » May 5th, '13, 02:03

Thanks SliK. :y:
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Re: New song "On the edge" feat. Eedee and Mat Demaz

Postby FxTDilz » May 9th, '13, 02:14

SliK wrote:Dilz your flow is awful. Just awful. Wayyy to many syllables in most of your lines.

Try to keep roughly the same amount of syllables per line because it doesn't matter if there is a multi a the end of every line when you're flowing so poorly. The content was good from all of you though.

Eedee your flow is actually good, props.

Not a bad chorus from Demaz either.


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