New song "On the edge" feat. Eedee and Mat Demaz

[FxTDilz]

Also have another new song, released this one today (2 days after my other song "the letter") . Would like to know thoughts on this one? Adlibs sound a little out but still learning what to do with those, just another stepping stone on my path to somewhere lol :P

Got some help from two guys i got know from these forums and im loving working with them on my music so shout out to eedee and mat demaz.

On the Edge - Dilz Feat. Eedee & Mat Demaz - YouTube

also here's my facebook fan page if anyone actually wants to like it and help build my fan base http://www.facebook.com/FxTDilz

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Mod note: Edited your post with the actual link to the YouTube video, seems like you forgot it. Lol. - Eedee

[Eedee]

As you already know, I love this song. Your verses sound better than the previous version we had, that new mic is awesome haha. Loved your rhyming and conviction.

Demaz had a perfect hook too; holy shit.

[PAINKILLƎR]

This was pretty dope, I like the vibe on the song from the emotion and all. The rhyming was tight from both of you, flows were alright could use some work but the track overall was great. Nice track you guys.

[Eedee]

Thanks for the feed, brah!

[Eedee]

I'm going to bump this.

[FxTDilz]

yea guys some comments on me multying the whole first verse? lol

[MistaVijilantee]

yea guys some comments on me multying the whole first verse? lol

As much as being able to spit multiple rhymes well is a skill, you sound like a douche if you go on about it.
Plenty of rappers multi but let the rap speak for itself.

Overall, pretty good, both had lyrics, Eedee's delivery was really good and Dilz lyrics showed you aren't just a one dimensional artist.
Well done, guys.

[Eedee]

yea guys some comments on me multying the whole first verse? lol

As much as being able to spit multiple rhymes well is a skill, you sound like a douche if you go on about it.
Plenty of rappers multi but let the rap speak for itself.

Overall, pretty good, both had lyrics, Eedee's delivery was really good and Dilz lyrics showed you aren't just a one dimensional artist.
Well done, guys.

Cheers.

What did you think of Demaz's hook?

[FxTDilz]

yea guys some comments on me multying the whole first verse? lol

As much as being able to spit multiple rhymes well is a skill, you sound like a douche if you go on about it.
Plenty of rappers multi but let the rap speak for itself.

Overall, pretty good, both had lyrics, Eedee's delivery was really good and Dilz lyrics showed you aren't just a one dimensional artist.
Well done, guys.

I multi pretty much all of my rhymes as you should know, I was just bragging bout multying the whole verse as was my first time doing so in a song, and i wasn't doing it in a "fuck im cool multing lyrics" way i was doing it in a "give the song a chance and have a listen to it cus obviously I put a bit of effort into if i took the time to multi a whole verse" .
This song came together amazingly IMO, my lyrics and new sound quality was good for the song, I'm a huge fan of Eedee and love doing songs with him and I can't wait to release more of the shit we've been working on, and Mat Demaz goes hard with everything he does, this hook came out perfectly and even my family sings along to it when the songs playing. Just a quick thank you to you guys and you've really helped me with a lot aye lol.

[TripleNineThree]

Everything was good in this song except the lyrics. None of you guys have a very good lyrical game, you really need to step your game up in that area. Maybe try doing some multis instead of using one syllable rhymes the entire time.












Just kidding. Track was dope, keep it up!

[Eedee]

Everything was good in this song except the lyrics. None of you guys have a very good lyrical game, you really need to step your game up in that area. Maybe try doing some multis instead of using one syllable rhymes the entire time.












Just kidding. Track was dope, keep it up!

Word.

[FxTDilz]

Everything was good in this song except the lyrics. None of you guys have a very good lyrical game, you really need to step your game up in that area. Maybe try doing some multis instead of using one syllable rhymes the entire time.



Just kidding. Track was dope, keep it up!

Had me going there lol, thanks bro

[MistaVijilantee]

In regards to the hook, it fits the song but I don't like the way it's sung.
The actual lyrics in it are great though, it's quite poetic just not my kind of singing.
I mean, if it wasn't this song, it wouldn't fit.

I multi pretty much all of my rhymes as you should know, I was just bragging bout multying the whole verse as was my first time doing so in a song, and i wasn't doing it in a "fuck im cool multing lyrics" way i was doing it in a "give the song a chance and have a listen to it cus obviously I put a bit of effort into if i took the time to multi a whole verse" .
This song came together amazingly IMO, my lyrics and new sound quality was good for the song, I'm a huge fan of Eedee and love doing songs with him and I can't wait to release more of the shit we've been working on, and Mat Demaz goes hard with everything he does, this hook came out perfectly and even my family sings along to it when the songs playing. Just a quick thank you to you guys and you've really helped me with a lot aye lol.

It's all right homie, I'm not tripping, just felt it needed to be said, but I'm glad that wasn't you intention
Your delivery reminds me of Angel Haze - you don't sound like a woman lol - but you have that kind of breathy, passonaite delivery.
It's good your family support you, not everyone has that luxury.
Keep it up fellas shit is dope.

[MistaVijilantee]

Fuck, quoting multiple things is hard as shit on this site.
If a mod could edit, that could be helpful.

[Eedee]

I fixed it up a bit. Thanks for the feedback as well!