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Sajjad The Heist - It's A Heist

Postby Xray » Apr 21st, '13, 06:46

Yo what's good, it's been years since I posted anything on here. Thought I'd drop this track to show where I'm at nowadays. I'm also dropping a group tape next month, so I'll post that here too. Feedback is appreciated, thanks.

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-Verse-
The games ready but it fails like a broke disc//
You get high? Motherfucker get your nose kicked//
Fuck a story telling, you're dieing like a rolling seven//
I'm like the flow of heaven, you'll never beat to be the second//
The murders never stated, it's playing like an imply//
Fucking maggot make you die like your inside//
It's BNR, no CPR, it's just death//
Motherfuckers wanna VCR the bloodshed//
Psychological methods getting invested//
Invisible efforts get severed if ever detected//
The sickle moving comfortably so fuck a triggernometry//
On point it's like an archery, I'm cutting up your artery//
upsetting all your anatomy, expelling this catastrophe//
It's iller when you're mad at me, the pen is like a panel beat//
I'm like an expo bobbing to the death flow//
rotten to the death note cause you don't wanna let go//
These lyrics kick it like its acrobatics, rappers scattered//
You ain't a biggie motherfucker why you act the baddest//
I'm at ya rescue just to be the first to cut you//
Introduce my middle finger motherfucker so fuck you//
Count the dates my bars like cancer waves//
Count the graves, I'm an outcast down to play//
It's the new camp, takeover who stand//
It's like WU Tang clan with a true plan//
Feast your prayer, gun attached to your facial hair//
It's vandalism verbalism right here//
A double agent and I'm killing off the energy//
Motherfucker in my mind there's no enemy//
The lyrical communist strap from your free will/
We ill get you smoked like a weed field/
It's transplant put the words to your chest//
Cut your motherfucking insides closer to death//
It's streets put your griefs in the flat line//
You lost a brother motherfucker and I past mine//
You're sick I'm a pharmacist//
I write bars motherfucker like an architect//
Got your back motherfucker like what karma did//
You know who osama is//
I put your head in the toilet till you solve the shit//
And if you breathe underwater I'll resolve to quit//
Your lyrics ain't a thing I just scrunch it//
Topics wanna die when I touch it//

-Hook-
It's the heist, it's the hype, it's the life//
Televised where the flow never dies//
I tell it wise like a ghost in the night//
Kill the mic, when it rise burn it down overdrive//


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Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
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I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Sajjad The Heist - It's A Heist

Postby yoshi » Apr 21st, '13, 22:36

oh you :wub:


love it and honestly you're the only TR rapper i still listen to - no offence guys :sweating: most probably coz of the content, you're one sick psycho :smoking: your flow didn't change much though, it's still as awesome as it's always been. dope beat, your own? looking forward to the tape.
i was thinking though, coz most of your songs got the same dark feel - i mean the ones i've heard so far - have you thought about how the tape gonna sound as a whole? like won't it get a bit repetitive? like AOTP for example? unless you got some special shizzle there :shifty:

I put your head in the toilet till you solve the shit//


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Re: Sajjad The Heist - It's A Heist

Postby Xray » Apr 22nd, '13, 09:39

Thanks a lot! Appreciate the feed. Yeah I know what you mean, the tape is actually a group tape so it's straight up lyrical and horror core, that's the content we went with. Don't worry there's pretty sick flows I did on there. Thanks again!
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Re: Sajjad The Heist - It's A Heist

Postby Xray » Apr 22nd, '13, 20:10

Thanks man, yeah after this tape is finished I'll work on personal tracks, been meaning to do that. I used to make a lot of tracks like that then I stopped.
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Re: Sajjad The Heist - It's A Heist

Postby Eedee » Apr 23rd, '13, 02:01

Fuck a story telling, you're dieing like a rolling seven//
I'm like the flow of heaven, you'll never beat to be the second//

Count the dates my bars like cancer waves//
Count the graves, I'm an outcast down to play//

The lyrical communist strap from your free will/
We ill get you smoked like a weed field/


^ Those lines the flow broke. You tried to fit too many syllables into the bar. Threw the vibe of the song off.

You also slur your words at times.

I ain't hating either. You've been here a while and doing rap so I'm only trying to help. :y:
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Re: Sajjad The Heist - It's A Heist

Postby Xray » Apr 23rd, '13, 04:41

Alright thanks man. Yeah I did slur a bit.
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Re: Sajjad The Heist - It's A Heist

Postby Francesco » Apr 23rd, '13, 13:14

I like some of it a lot... good overall! :y:
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Re: Sajjad The Heist - It's A Heist

Postby preest » Apr 24th, '13, 10:32

Bro I gotta say its a nice track, I can see what Eedee was saying about you slurring in places but I dont think it mattered too much, I think the whole track would sound alot clearer if you went through and sliced up the adlibs and lined them up to be in perfect sync with the main vocal!! Lyrically I dont think it can be faulted, its sick.... wordplay, punches, multies, the flow switches up throughout...its all there bro!! I also love Horrorcore type stuff so this had me instantly (nothing like a bit of violence lol).

All in all its a dope track, just a few things I would do differently but then everybody will have different opinions so just keep doing what your doing bro, good job!
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Re: Sajjad The Heist - It's A Heist

Postby Kez » May 18th, '13, 02:00

As always X I think your voice is fucking awesome. I'm so sorry it took me so long to get around to this.

You make the kind of music I can just... listen to. And don't have to think about it. Your flow fits your voice so fucking well that I just love listening to it. When you end your lines, it's just.. aah. Glorious. Nothing but the dark shit that I just love listening to. You make me wish I could detatch my personal life from my music as well as this.

I'm rambling a bit, but there is no point me giving you "critique" that I don't mean, because really I aint got any criticism for you at all man. I just thought you should know that I did indeed listen to this many times.
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