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My First Offical Music Video!

Postby MistaVijilantee » May 1st, '13, 14:11

So, this is the latest song I've released and it is the first time I've had the opportunity to make a proper music videos.
This is also an entry to a contest, so if you like it, your comments and feedback would be appreciated.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kK030r1FzgI :y:

Feedback Thread I posted in: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=156726
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Re: My First Offical Music Video!

Postby Eedee » May 2nd, '13, 10:11

I liked it. To be honest, I thought you were a girl until I saw that video.

Onwards to the music!

I liked it. You had great rhymes, I could feel the multis flowing through your veins haha. The vocal quality was sort of poor, but looking past that, the flow was great and delivery was solid. You messed up a few times like at :37 trying to cram too many syllables in, made it sound awkward from an otherwise good flow.

I liked it and subscribed. :y:
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Re: My First Offical Music Video!

Postby MistaVijilantee » May 2nd, '13, 11:13

Eedee wrote:I liked it. To be honest, I thought you were a girl until I saw that video.

Onwards to the music!

I liked it. You had great rhymes, I could feel the multis flowing through your veins haha. The vocal quality was sort of poor, but looking past that, the flow was great and delivery was solid. You messed up a few times like at :37 trying to cram too many syllables in, made it sound awkward from an otherwise good flow.

I liked it and subscribed. :y:


Really? Haha.

Yeah, I didn't have pop filter and when I was adlibing I was a bit iffy, I think that's why it sounds muddier.
I appreciate your feedback and the like & such.
I have a FB fan page to if you're interested: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Vijilant ... 198?ref=hl
I also really enjoy your music so if you've got anything newer hit me up! :y:
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Re: My First Offical Music Video!

Postby Eedee » May 2nd, '13, 11:18

I liked your page. I just saw you liked mine as well lol. Awesome.
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Re: My First Offical Music Video!

Postby FxTDilz » May 2nd, '13, 12:35

naaw the perfect couple :P
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Re: My First Offical Music Video!

Postby Midnight EyeZ » May 3rd, '13, 13:04

The sounds were a little too high...Sounds like the vocals were really turnt up, especially with the adlibs it sounded really distorted, muffled and over-bassy...I know you say you didn't have a pop filter but I'm talking about the general levels...Sounded way too loud for a beat that didn't have too much going on...

Which brings me to the second point which is I didn't really like the beat...That's my personal opinion anyway, other people might love it but for me there needed to be a little bit more to it...

Apart from that I enjoyed it, nice lyrics, good flow, some nice multis in there...

Good job but the vocal levels really let it down...

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Re: My First Offical Music Video!

Postby MistaVijilantee » May 4th, '13, 12:18

Midnight EyeZ wrote:The sounds were a little too high...Sounds like the vocals were really turnt up, especially with the adlibs it sounded really distorted, muffled and over-bassy...I know you say you didn't have a pop filter but I'm talking about the general levels...Sounded way too loud for a beat that didn't have too much going on...

Which brings me to the second point which is I didn't really like the beat...That's my personal opinion anyway, other people might love it but for me there needed to be a little bit more to it...

Apart from that I enjoyed it, nice lyrics, good flow, some nice multis in there...

Good job but the vocal levels really let it down...

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Thank you sir, I'll take note of that next time I record.
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Re: My First Offical Music Video!

Postby FxTDilz » May 4th, '13, 12:30

I've given you my advice but main thing is the song could've done without the holy water part lol
nice work though bro
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Re: My First Offical Music Video!

Postby Francesco » May 5th, '13, 01:11

I checked it... I like it. :y:
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Re: My First Offical Music Video!

Postby MistaVijilantee » May 27th, '13, 05:06

Francesco wrote:I checked it... I like it. :y:


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