Some Snippets of mine

[Nick419]

Hey Guys, I'm fairly new to recording and would like to share some of my stuff. Both of these snippets are kind of old (esp. the 2nd one as you'll be able to tell by some of the punch lines plus i go off beat more so than the 1st one) but I'd like to share them just to get some advice, constructive criticism, etc. ..... I work 2 jobs so it's hard for me to ever finish anything but I'd like to start working on a 1st mixtape this summer. Let me know what you think

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H7WiUKdc ... e=youtu.be

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[KingDavid]

I liked the beats, and the delivery was always audible. the production suited the rhyme schemes and overall it flowed nicely. Good work

[Nick419]

Thanks man I really appreciate it : )