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Cryptic Ft Teflon West Lockdown Liv - Real G's RatoBeatProd.

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Postby 313Relapse » May 18th, '13, 17:57

Lof viewtopic.php?f=38&t=159588&p=2188375#p2188375

YT Link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Bp0X3A3m-0

Collab i threw together with a couple friends. Beat was produced by RatoBeatProductions, all feedback appreciated i will return the favor.
Order goes Teflon West, Lockdown, Me, Liv and me on the chorus
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Re: Cryptic Ft Teflon West Lockdown Liv - Real G's RatoBeatP

Postby Eedee » May 19th, '13, 13:51

That beat is pretty damn chill.

First dude had a cool flow, voice was nice too.

Your hook was a little... underwhelming? Nice lyrics and shit, but yeah....

Second dude made me laugh. Felt like he was trying too hard to sound gangster lol, maybe that's just his normal voice, I guess. Nice rhymes though.

Your verse was pretty cool. I loved the ET line haha

Holy shit a girl. What is this. :P Kidding, she was pretty legit.

Good shit, man.
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Re: Cryptic Ft Teflon West Lockdown Liv - Real G's RatoBeatP

Postby 313Relapse » May 20th, '13, 03:28

Thanks for the feed! yea i knew i had to write to this when i first hear it ahha.
I hear ya on the hook.. i still need some work on my delivery.
Lockdown always raps like that.. his voice is too soft if he doesn't, plus it makes people laugh ahha.
Thanks lol was just havin fun with this one.
Yea Liv's pretty dope, first time i heard her rap too
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