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Dilz - "Not Over You" (ft. Shortii)

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Dilz - "Not Over You" (ft. Shortii)

Postby Eedee » May 19th, '13, 23:50

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YouTube Lyric Video

So I mixed this and made the lyric video... figured I might as well drop this for him lol

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Re: Dilz - "Not Over You" (ft. Shortii)

Postby 313Relapse » May 20th, '13, 03:36

First verse comes in with a really good presence and delivery. Delivery matches the feel of the beat and meshes well. Flow is definitely there, syllables hit pretty well.
Lyrics fit the feel of the beat, A good verse over-all .
The chorus is well written but something does sound off about the way it's sang. I'm not saying she has a bad. voice but i think this aspect could have been better.
I liked the strategically rhyme scheme at the start of the second verse, that was dope.
Third verse is dope to but the flow doesn't seem as confident.
All in all this was a good listen, the mix was great and the recording quality was on point.
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