Eedee - "Bonfire" (Remix)

[Eedee]

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Soundcloud link

*Track 1 from my upcoming remix mixtape, dropping June 1. Remix of Childish Gambino's "Bonfire" from his album (Camp, 2011). Enjoy!

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I got a goal and I'm headed for the top,
You may have the ball but I steady watch it drop.
This is my court, five forces - I can sense it,
Buddy, tie you with a rope, how cord-dially a friendship!
You feel it gettin' warmer? Get outta the microwave,
This nuke'll get you tidal waved. Blink? That is quite okay.
I will lift you up, brah, like two tits,
Straight from Colony, don't tread on me like shoe prints.
Drop the beat.. mentally abused kid,
The world isn't black and white, much unlike a newsprint.
A few sips of that Haterade will do shit,
But I revel in insanity that's why I make my music.
Haters lose it on every single bar,
I may sound like Donald Glover but that dude is really hard.
And I'm known in my Community, I'm a study group,
An ugly dude who studies rap until I fucking rule.
I need the King's Crown, put the ring down,
Not married to the game cuz the game is what he is now!
I feed off adrenaline, it's better a symbiote,
I make you run crazy like a head right off a chicken's throat.

[B.A.D.]

Hey brother, check your soundcloud link because it links me to my previously heard songs or something like that and not to this one.

anyhow, lyrics are brilliant fam

"I need the King's Crown, put the ring down,
Not married to the game cuz the game is what he is now!"

fucking true

[Eedee]

The link in the OP works for me...

But thanks for the look, BAD!!

[Eedee]

Aw, that was one of my favorite parts lol

I tried to emulate the type of lyrics that were on the original beat (Gambino's) with doing like, punchlines and wordplay and shit. Oh well.

I'm sure you'll like some other tracks from the tape. I'm doing Homecoming (Kanye), Lighters and Monsters In My Head and such... This was just a banging intro track haha.

Thanks for listening anyway, Geno.

[B.A.D.]

Thanks for the Link Geno!

holy Shit Eedee, thats a brilliant delivery man!! I did not expect this at all when I read the lyrics hahaha... fucking fire man.. damn

[Eedee]

Yeah geno, that's understandable man. Besides, you know me well enough as a writer to know this isn't what I usually do in terms of subject matter and style. I'm more of a rhymer/flower lol

And damn BAD haha, thanks bro!!

[Wreck]

This was dope as fuck, keep grindin bro, good work. Loved the lyrics/lyricism in it.

[Eedee]

Cheers, man. Appreciate it.

[yung rom]

whoah, that was awesome. loved ur last line: "I make you run crazy like a head right off a chicken's throat." My only suggestion is keep ur verse's/stanzas' flows consistent. Not like having the same rhythm every line for the whole song, but like for the two lines u rhyme (or four sometimes) use the same rhythm for each. It just makes everything sound way more consistent. But other than that, nice job, it was dope.

[Eedee]

Cheers!

[mdemaz]

Quality is topnotch.

Funny-ass lines in there.

Lol @ the chicken line.

I think your voice sounds great when it's over-produced like that; I can't hear any nasal noise at all.

I guess you are blessed with a loose nose.