by TripleNineThree » Jun 16th, '13, 20:54
The chorus sounds great. I love the vocals on it and they are crystal clear. Definitely sounds like something I would hear on the radio as far as the hook goes.
Verse 1 - Dang!!!! You definitely brought it on this verse. Your delivery was great, I could feel the emotion in your voice. The only thing that sounds odd is when the song goes from your verse back into the hook. It doesn't seem like they go together because of the mixing. I'm not sure why because the mixing on your verse sounds great... it just doesn't match the hook if that makes any sense.
Verse 2 - DGAF, this is one of the best verses I have heard from you. I'm pretty certain the same person who mixed Eedee's verse mixed yours as well because they are similar in style which is great (Demaz I'm guessing?). I can tell that you have a microphone that isn't as high quality as Eedee because of the weird buzzing sound at parts which the mix brought out but your verse was still great.
Verse 3 - TO be honest, my internet is down so I'm using my phone as a wireless network and I can't get the dang video to play the third verse. I will keep trying and once I get it, I will update this with feed for the third verse!