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It Won't Be Long

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Re: It Won't Be Long

Postby MistaVijilantee » Jul 6th, '13, 05:53

Your lyricism and story telling is great, but sometimes the adlibs feel a tiny beat overpowering of the original layer, but I guess that's just down to mixing - I have this problem as well haha/
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Re: It Won't Be Long

Postby Mr.DGAF » Jul 6th, '13, 05:56

Ahh thanks man. And yeah I feel you, still working out the kinks of mixing and all haha.



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Re: It Won't Be Long

Postby Atone » Jul 8th, '13, 18:22

good beat, i like the chorus, and your lyrics are pretty nice, idk if it's my internet connection cutting out or if you sound a lil off on this but i still like this,

is that you singin the chorus? if so, thats awesome that you can do both singin and rappin
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Re: It Won't Be Long

Postby Spyder » Jul 8th, '13, 20:15

Atone wrote:is that you singin the chorus?


Mr.DGAF wrote:And the hooks not mine FYI, it's J Cole's. :y:
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Re: It Won't Be Long

Postby Atone » Jul 8th, '13, 20:20

Spyder wrote:
Atone wrote:is that you singin the chorus?


Mr.DGAF wrote:And the hooks not mine FYI, it's J Cole's. :y:



Lol i feel dumb
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Re: It Won't Be Long

Postby Nick419 » Jul 8th, '13, 20:49

Great lyrics and the chorus really fits this track. Only thing you could work on is your flow like the others pointed out. and coming from someone that makes music as well, I know hearing that is the most frustrating damn thing lol. I remember when I first started i thought writing would be the most difficult thing to tackle but o was I wrong... It's all about finding your voice, Something I still have trouble with to this day. But keep it up man your def. heading in the right direction
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