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Kez - Insomnia

Postby Kez » Aug 7th, '13, 15:18

Haven't posted a new song in about 8 months, so here. This is like.. about a year old. But.. yeah.

Link of feed. Really I wish I had time to leave lots of feed so I don't look like i'm just coming here to advertise my own shit, but I simply don't have the time to do it without it looking contrived. I just wanted to share the song for those few who might be interested, that's all.

Don't know my current status or as to when i'll have new music out. It's uncertain. But this is just a little offering.

Produced by: Big Ax-D

Listen to the song here if you wish.

Light a cigarette, staring at the night sky
Thinking so hard about my life
Spent so much time just writing my rhymes
That when I last checked, it wasn't fucking nighttime
I've spent my life just crafting rap that no-one hears
Trying to alleviate so I have no more fears
And there are no more tears, cause I achieved success
Whether you want to accept it or not, be my guest
Beat my chest, this world is mine for the taking
Fuck the love, I only have time for the hatred
My alarm clock is my worst enemy
Killed lady luck, she will just burn, dead to me
Remember what I said? How I don't sleep at night?
This is what I do motherfucker, I don't need a life
I ignore watches, because if I see the time
I wasted, i'd probably have no choice but to grieve and cry

[Chorus]
This is the curse of genius, creativity
This is the curse God wrapped up to give to me
And there's a name for it, so if you're listening
Let me tell you the effects of insomnia
These are the facts, your lies don't mean shit to me
Leave me alone, I like my fucking misery
Cause I know one day i'll have my victory
Sit up all night, dwelling on this shit, because this is insomnia

Darkness envelops me at every side
Some people forgot me, and I was left to die
But I crawled out of the grave to grab a pen and mic
And keep on writing raps about my time in Trentham High
And now I find that I may face a crude fate
It's been years and now I find my mood great
I'm no longer a person that you hate
I need new subject matter, before it's too late
Paper's ripped up, teared up and thrown away
Covered in the words that my haunted heart chose to say
I need to get on the right path, so if you know the way
Stop misleading me onto these dirt-tracks and roads astray
And life gets in the way, my life's work on the backburner
I'd rather be a dreamer than a fucking fact-churner
Hated in my own domain, a laughing flag burner
And I will fucking never change, of that, I am certain

[Chorus]

This shit is enough to drive a man nuts
But I will crumble no more, it's time to stand up
As a kid it was fine, but now there's no excuse
There's a reason for all this, and I know it's use
So as I watch the stars just sit mocking me
And write lyrics full of my own hypocrisy
Mark these words out of all of the ones I speak:
I'll never accept that this shit was not to be.

[Chorus]
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Re: Kez - Insomnia

Postby Fleka » Aug 7th, '13, 16:45

Good song, I kinda like your voice. And you have a punchable face.
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Re: Kez - Insomnia

Postby Eedee » Aug 8th, '13, 02:26

This was pretty good, man. Flow felt weird a few times. Like the:

Light a cigarette, staring at the night sky
Thinking so hard about my life


Going into that second bar, I could kinda hear you hesitate on the pause like you had to remember not to flow smoothly into the bar lol. Oh well. No biggie though.

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Re: Kez - Insomnia

Postby Ticalrecords » Aug 9th, '13, 15:15

the only part i found questionable was the chorus. and not most of the chorus, just the part where you say insomnia loll.
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Re: Kez - Insomnia

Postby Vettori » Aug 13th, '13, 02:03

The beat is actually crazy as fuck haha.... Good job on that axe..
Kez your voice Kills me, It sounds so fucking sick.. I feel if you added just the perfect amount of energy to it, you'd have this shit in the bag... You say this is old hahah Damn bud..You better be making some secret shit ready to release... I'm awaiting it.

Check my new shit out ;)
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Re: Kez - Insomnia

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 14th, '13, 23:59

Kez is a muthafucking Monster
sick shit

Thanks on the beat comments :)
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Re: Kez - Insomnia

Postby 1800lettuce » Aug 23rd, '13, 10:24

Are you making your voice have that tone on purpose? because it sounds silly
if you were to stop doing that then you would probably sound way better
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Re: Kez - Insomnia

Postby Tash8 » Aug 26th, '13, 21:21

For the new guys that dont kno Kez. He's not the type to spam you with his music to try to get you to listen. But you haven't heard his music yet, y' all missing out.

It's been years and now I find my mood great
I'm no longer a person that you hate
I need new subject matter, before it's too late


Lol, that's really funny, i do remember you're old songs so I understand this completely, but dont worry you wont have trouble finding a subject matter if this is any indication. 1 song every 8 month is too long of a time, kezinem.
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Re: Kez - Insomnia

Postby voice23 » Aug 29th, '13, 07:26

Hey, nice flow, good word play. I dig your style.
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Re: Kez - Insomnia

Postby Nick419 » Aug 29th, '13, 17:04

This is my first time listening to you and man I got to say your a terrific writer. The hook ties in perfect imo as far as the subject matter. Theres certain parts where the flow sounds iffy but its only on a few parts and you always manage to pick thing right back up. Good mixing as well. Overall great job
RIP Big proof~Broken hearted, my soul's like a open target
And I'm ready to leave Earth
You step to my death next year on my T-shirt
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