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New Track! - Ghosts

Postby Nick419 » Aug 29th, '13, 17:13

This is probably bad timing because of all the MMLP2 mania going on, But I'd still like to share/get some feedback on a track I just made.

Overall I'm happy with it except theres one part at the end of my last verse where I had to Punch in and my flow sounds a little sloppy.

But anyways let me know what you think!

Track - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bFi0ZvSRHd4

Feedback - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=162498&p=2296141#p2296141
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Re: New Track! - Ghosts

Postby SoldierShady » Aug 29th, '13, 17:39

Nice rhyming there man. :y: Delivery could use a bit of work but I like it overall.
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Re: New Track! - Ghosts

Postby Nick419 » Aug 29th, '13, 18:05

Thanks man! yeah delivery is the hardest thing to develop. But when I compare my last two songs I made to my earlier stuff I can def. tell I'm improving. Practice makes perfect!
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