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Catastrophic - "Falling Tears"

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Catastrophic - "Falling Tears"

Postby Mr.DGAF » Sep 3rd, '13, 07:26

DGAFeed:http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=163481&p=2304207#p2304207

https://soundcloud.com/eedeemusic/catas ... ling-tears

Catastrophic
FALLING TEARS
(Prod. by Ear2ThaBeat)

[Hook: Bitch]
I count the falling tears,
They fall, they fall, my eyes,
Seems like a thousand years
Since we broke the ties.
(x2)

[Verse 1: DGAF]
Not another sad song, fuck that
I’ve been reminiscing on my past faults, such that
I’ve forgotten every reason why my dad calls
Why I’m in this class hall and why this is my last small chance
A little misdirection hidden by a crossroad
In the middle of the intersection of a lost soul
I’ve gone from top row to bottom of the food chain
Linked back to the problem of my school days
I’ve never really been the type of guy
That might’ve tried to find a time to go and meet or bother with a roommate
So please forgive me for being empty, I see the finish
Line and when it’s time I’ll be walking with a new pace
The shy qualities might fall on me, I oughtta be
Focused on friends but this life college brings
Isn’t quite all for me, I’m hoping it ends
And when it does I’ll be the only person soaking it in because


[Hook: Bitch]

[Verse 2: Eedee]
Looking ahead, I power on, yeah
But that gaze turned into a thousand yard stare.
College was a turnin' point,
Honest but it hurt to voice,
Qualms to my parents, I promised 'em a perfect boy.
Coupled with my best friend being my roommate,
I kept my fears buried down deep in my suitcase.
Walkin' the halls, covered teeth up with toothpaste,
Brush hangin' from my mouth, homie just you wait.
Gettin' a college degree with rap on the side,
Sounds like a plan, then suddenly it happened and I
Got a strike of motivation to pursue the pen and pad
And it felt like no emotion that I've ever really had.
This was my calling, everything had gone South
I'd never have guessed that I'd be a fucking drop-out.
It's probably a dumb move, but fuck you!
It's my life, I can ruin it if I want to.


[Hook: Bitch]
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Catastrophic - "Falling Tears"

Postby Eedee » Sep 3rd, '13, 07:35

Pleasure doing business with you, my good sir.

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Re: Catastrophic - "Falling Tears"

Postby Mr.DGAF » Sep 3rd, '13, 21:03

Eedee wrote:Pleasure doing business with you, my good sir.

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Re: Catastrophic - "Falling Tears"

Postby Eedee » Sep 5th, '13, 20:09

But on some real talk, I really loved your schemes in this one. They all felt natural and you had some sick ass rhyming. Especially at the beginning.
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Re: Catastrophic - "Falling Tears"

Postby MistaVijilantee » Sep 7th, '13, 03:28

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Re: Catastrophic - "Falling Tears"

Postby Eedee » Sep 7th, '13, 03:35

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Re: Catastrophic - "Falling Tears"

Postby Eedee » Sep 7th, '13, 03:39

Cheers, bigray. :)
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Re: Catastrophic - "Falling Tears"

Postby MistaVijilantee » Sep 7th, '13, 12:50

This is good.
For some reason - maybe it's my speakers - but some of the vocals seem a little muddy in parts?
I'm really starting to like DGAF's delivery, tbh.
Even though I can't really relate to this, I could still feel the emotion from both of you.
You guys work well as a duo, btw.
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Re: Catastrophic - "Falling Tears"

Postby Mr.DGAF » Sep 7th, '13, 16:51

Thanks for the feed man, really appreciate it.
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Re: Catastrophic - "Falling Tears"

Postby da r star » Sep 15th, '13, 18:06

I really liked that beat. You got a good flow and I like your rhyme pattern. But I had a bit of a problem with your voice, it felt a little forced. I would like to hear how you sound with a more "normal" voice. Cool song!
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Re: Catastrophic - "Falling Tears"

Postby Mr.DGAF » Sep 15th, '13, 23:42

I feel you dude, I had a pretty nice cold when I recorded this. But I only get like one or two chances a month to record so I just went with it. There's some stuff coming where you can tell a difference, but yeah, appreciate the feed mane. I'll return the favor in a minute.
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