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Flamez - Cruise Control [2011]

Postby Flamez » Sep 14th, '13, 18:34

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This song was done in 2011. I was messing around and turned into a song some lines are cheesy and like I said I was messing around just writing. haha hope you enjoy :sweating:

I'm getting back into writing again, and I might start doing audio again who knows.
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Re: Flamez - Cruise Control [2011]

Postby da r star » Sep 15th, '13, 18:01

The beat was good. Did you make it?

You're not bad, but you need to work on your pronunciation, because you're chewing your words a bit. Also, you should invest in a better microphone or work on the mixing, because it made it hard to understand what you were saying at times. I know this feedback is more about how it actually sounded, but sound is very important.

As for the rapping, the lyrics were decent and the flow too. The hook is what I liked the most.
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Re: Flamez - Cruise Control [2011]

Postby Flamez » Sep 16th, '13, 04:58

Naw man I don't make my own beats I think I got that from soundclick. I usually don't mix my own shit either, but I did that time and it didn't it turn out too good. Thanks for the feed though will work on the sound.
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Re: Flamez - Cruise Control [2011]

Postby mdemaz » Sep 16th, '13, 05:28

Pretty cool.

Quality is a bit meh, but, I still enjoyed it.

Just work on mastering your style and you should be all set.
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Re: Flamez - Cruise Control [2011]

Postby Flamez » Sep 20th, '13, 00:34

Thanks man.
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Re: Flamez - Cruise Control [2011]

Postby sneakerheadshady » Sep 21st, '13, 13:57

i really like this beat, and your flow is really good. Also the hook is straight fire. Just wondering what type of mike do you use?
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Re: Flamez - Cruise Control [2011]

Postby Flamez » Sep 23rd, '13, 17:14

Thanks, I used a snowball microphone.
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Re: Flamez - Cruise Control [2011]

Postby sneakerheadshady » Sep 23rd, '13, 18:35

ok thanks.. im looking for mikes to get.. im using a usb one thqat was lying around hhaa
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