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Journey On

Postby Eedee » Sep 21st, '13, 17:52

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Link: https://soundcloud.com/eedeemusic/journ ... -dmb-beats

Time is of the essence, the longer it takes us
This journey that we're on, the stronger it makes us.
Patience is a virtue, we hustle and yawn
Till we're exhausted and drop down, thunder from God
Just echoes in our ears, a reminder in song
In the form of drums booming, then lightning applauds.
And it strikes in our hearts - the Sun's looming
Over top of our goals, doubt is our undoing.

Humans tend to sway so hither and thither
Until we open our eyes and see the picture is bigger.
Stupid till the day that we open our minds,
Enterin' information and just hopin' we're right.
Till our lights turn off and your lips don't move,
Fight until you taste blood and spit yo' tooth.
Spill your life into the pavement or create your own,
Fight back if they're racin' to erase your home.

Sometimes the journey that we take is hard,
Sometimes it's needed to erase the scars.
Sometimes the feeling that we came so far
Is overshadowed by the fact who we say we are
Is no different than the versions that we dream to be,
Diverted by diversions so diverse with ease
That every direction has been trod before,
So we're Set in our ways, like a god of war.
But then we lift our eyes and we can see the sky
And that feeling deep inside? It can keep alive
The key to our cell, but we keep dividin',
Till we breathe divine and we can see horizons...
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Re: Journey On

Postby enjinn » Sep 21st, '13, 18:43

man i LOVE your delivery...you have a lot of energy on the mic...sounds really dope...i cant wait to hear more from you...and you pick good beats
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Re: Journey On

Postby Eedee » Sep 21st, '13, 19:04

enjinn wrote:man i LOVE your delivery...you have a lot of energy on the mic...sounds really dope...i cant wait to hear more from you...and you pick good beats


I have a bunch of stuff in this section!
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Re: Journey On

Postby Eedee » Sep 21st, '13, 19:20

Rollefsen wrote:Rolly da goat :worship:


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Re: Journey On

Postby Flamez » Sep 21st, '13, 19:36

Sounds even better in audio. Loved it man your delivery and the flow is good too.
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Re: Journey On

Postby Eedee » Sep 21st, '13, 19:37

Appreciate it. I'm glad people like it!
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Re: Journey On

Postby EmTV » Sep 22nd, '13, 03:35

I'll check it out on your audio link, but even written I could find the flow and feel the emotion. :y: This was pretty GOAT tbh.
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Re: Journey On

Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '13, 03:37

This is the audio link haha. But yeah, cheers man.
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Re: Journey On

Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '13, 05:25

Rollefsen wrote:Eedee im not kidding, ive listened to this like 20 times today

you are goat :flutter:


20? God damn, man. Welp, I'm glad you like it. :wave:

You'll probably like my album next month then too! Yay!
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Re: Journey On

Postby Glightning » Sep 30th, '13, 04:14

I'm really feeling your lyrics and the emotion in your words. The beat is a great match with the lyrics and the way you ride it is perfect. My only complaint is the verses are a little shorter then most songs but thats not really a big deal lol. Good job bro.
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Re: Journey On

Postby mdemaz » Sep 30th, '13, 04:54

Wtf, this sounds really good.
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Re: Journey On

Postby MistaVijilantee » Sep 30th, '13, 11:14

I think it's dope that you have a sort of poetic way of writing, but I honestly want your music to be more personalized.
I don't mean like you have to be overally honest about your life but incoporating more storytelling would make your music even better than it already is (y).
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Re: Journey On

Postby Eedee » Sep 30th, '13, 11:23

^ have you heard "Falling Tears"? It's posted on here, it's pretty personal. :y:
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Re: Journey On

Postby VintageSlimBish » Oct 1st, '13, 21:21

Dang, nice sample, and lyrics. Besides the Verse's shifting volume, I thought it was great.
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Re: Journey On

Postby Eedee » Oct 2nd, '13, 01:08

Thanks. The volumes were fine, the mixing shifted is all.
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