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Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 24th, '13, 04:07

Hey guys havent dropped anything for a while , thought you guys could give me your feedback on this one off my tape "no shame" , the song is called i got a question..check it out the lyrics are on screen. :b:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pdMwkDXHAls





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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby mdemaz » Sep 24th, '13, 04:15

You're still in good form.

The mixing is a bit over the top still, but, you did pretty well on the verses.
I didn't like how the beat keeps ducking, though...

That's all I have to say.
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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 24th, '13, 16:26

mdemaz wrote:You're still in good form.

The mixing is a bit over the top still, but, you did pretty well on the verses.
I didn't like how the beat keeps ducking, though...

That's all I have to say.

alright bro, thank you for your time :smoking:
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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby Eedee » Sep 25th, '13, 06:15

The auto-tune at the beginning was a bit much... I think layering it would've made it sound more natural and better. IMO.

As for the song, I think this was one of my favorite songs off your album (other than ours' hehe).

The only thing I could say is work on on lining up the adlibs and making the end rhymes pop out more. Like on the first verse "write raps" scheme, you didn't do that right and the end rhymes kinda just fell short. Nahimean?
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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby TripleNineThree » Sep 25th, '13, 06:17

Man.. You need to take your time on your songs and line up you adlibs. Almost every song I hear from you has your adlibs way off from the main vocals so it's almost impossible at times to understand the end of your lines. You need to zoom in and actually line them up.
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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby Eedee » Sep 25th, '13, 06:21

TripleNineThree wrote:Man.. You need to take your time on your songs and line up you adlibs. Almost every song I hear from you has your adlibs way off from the main vocals so it's almost impossible at times to understand the end of your lines. You need to zoom in and actually line them up.


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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby mdemaz » Sep 25th, '13, 07:35

Oh my god...

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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 25th, '13, 15:19

TripleNineThree wrote:Man.. You need to take your time on your songs and line up you adlibs. Almost every song I hear from you has your adlibs way off from the main vocals so it's almost impossible at times to understand the end of your lines. You need to zoom in and actually line them up.

alright thanks guys, triple , eedee and mdemaz..so i guess ill focus on lining up my adlibs next time...cuz i just record over it as it comes i dont line it up i leave it as i did it...so yeah ill take note and work on that next time. thank you
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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby Eedee » Sep 25th, '13, 16:17

Yeah, np. Even when I think I nail the adlibs, sometimes they don't' line up. Human error and sometimes the DAW lags.
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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 25th, '13, 17:30

yeah right bro , ill work on that dont worry !
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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby Eedee » Sep 25th, '13, 17:31

Cool cool cool.

What do you do for your main vocals mixing wise? Sounds like a lot of compression.
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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 25th, '13, 18:37

Eedee wrote:Cool cool cool.

What do you do for your main vocals mixing wise? Sounds like a lot of compression.

nothing , i just record on fruity loops with limiter perset noise gate thats all..its boring to mix -_-
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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby Eedee » Sep 25th, '13, 18:45

You should try play around with Fruity Compressor and EQ. It's fun to hear what you can do with your voice. :y:
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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 25th, '13, 19:26

Eedee wrote:You should try play around with Fruity Compressor and EQ. It's fun to hear what you can do with your voice. :y:

compressor and eq?? ahaa what do you change in EQ? ill try it
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Re: Redzek - I Got A Question

Postby Eedee » Sep 25th, '13, 19:39

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Do this. Hit the Vintage Mix preset and for the Gain knob, turn it down to like 5.5 or something so it's not so loud. You can tinker with the volumes as you wish in the final stages once you have the sound quality you want.

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Try starting with this, it'll help clean up your vocals a bit, then start playing around with it until it fits the beat.
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