Him Shadow - In Our Home

[Him Shadow]

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ok, so this is song I wrote for my girlfriend, I know that mixing is totally fucked up, so I would appreciate if you could say more about the lyrics, flow etc

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9hqWPNOWLSM

[TripleNineThree]

Listening now....

And yes, the mixing is done very badly. It's good that you know that but my personal opinion is that songs should not be released if there wasn't adequate time spent mixing and mastering it. If you did not spend time making it sound good, why would people spend time listening?

Your flow is off quite a bit. You are on beat for the most part but there are still quite a few places where you fall off beat.

I actually enjoy the chorus. If it was mixed properly, it might sound really dope. It sounds like you have a decent singing voice but I can't tell because of the mixing.

This is an okay song but if you plan on doing more audio, SPEND TIME crafting every song making it sound perfect. From the mixing, lyrics, flow to delivery etc...

[Him Shadow]

thanks for reply

yeah I know I should've worked on it, next time I will spend some time on the mixing part. oh and I can't sing at all, but if it's a simple melody like this it's not that hard for me to do it I think

[mdemaz]

You sound like Yelawolf.
Pretty interesting lyrics and the hook is nice.
Parts like 2:30 sorta throw me off, though.

Yes, put more time into your craft.

You'll be thanking yourself for doing so.

[Eedee]

Not much else I can say that hasn't already been said.