Theres a few minor things I may eventually change in this song but overall I'm satisfied with my verses. This is the first time I tackled a rock influenced beat so it's def. a different type of song for me. Feedback would be appreciated!
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New track- Here we Go!
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New track- Here we Go!
by Nick419 » Dec 8th, '13, 20:27
RIP Big proof~Broken hearted, my soul's like a open target
And I'm ready to leave Earth
You step to my death next year on my T-shirt
And I'm ready to leave Earth
You step to my death next year on my T-shirt
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Re: New track- Here we Go!
by Restlesswon » Dec 17th, '13, 03:53
not bad man, keep at it!, I like the verses.
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Re: New track- Here we Go!
by Nick419 » Dec 17th, '13, 22:23
Thanks! I really appreciate it. I have my next song about 85% written so hopefully I can have it up by this week or next. Keep an eye out for it 
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Re: New track- Here we Go!
by Ka0t1c » Dec 19th, '13, 06:54
i didn't like the 1st minute.. and then you changed your voice it sounded like which made it worse, but the lyrics were fine until... the chorus, it was dragging on and i couldn't bare it anymore. doesn't mean i hate you...yet... maybe i'll like your next track a lot better
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: New track- Here we Go!
by mdemaz » Dec 20th, '13, 14:02
Pretty dope.
It's breath of fresh air for a change.
I think you should fiddle around with different deliveries to see what suits you better.
And that's pretty cool that you do all the technical stuff yourself.
It's breath of fresh air for a change.
I think you should fiddle around with different deliveries to see what suits you better.
And that's pretty cool that you do all the technical stuff yourself.
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