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Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

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Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby Boston » Dec 10th, '13, 12:23

I use to post in here a few years Ago before i stopped recording.. Idk whose still around in here but ay. Heres two verses i recorded last night. First time ina studio since 2010/2011

Verse 1:

Fuck a rap career i rather have a union job/ and get my act in gear so i dont have to be this stupid slob/
all you do is rob, me of respect this stupid song/
is just to shove it down your fucking neck so i can prove you wrong/
Im never caving in or tappin out the cave your in im draggin out your body beat your ass until your blacking out/
Until your black and blue ill fucking beat you blue and black/
Its true infact ill bruise and scratch until theres nothing of you attached/
They shoulda threw and trapped me, put me ina room and latch me/
With these rappers and my competition, me and who exactly?/
Ya im truly wacky people all they do is ask me/
throwing questions in my face like is it really true your happy?/
I grew up on some marshall mathers through my baby times/
So all the violent scenes that start to gather in my crazy mind/
Maybe i can maybe rhyme maybe i can maybe climb/
My way up to the top i showed respect so you should pay me mine/

Verse 2:

you should pay me mine cuz i been spitting crazy lines/
Before my baby times i wasnt thought of back in 89/
And these lazy minds will comprehend, its not pretend/
Stop again is not an option i will never stop this pen/
I know you know no one here could hold a light or flame/
Writing quite insane and on the mic im not the type to differ-
You know its quite the same, i came to strike some pain/
I came i might remain until i snap and fight my brain/
And who might to blame that i welcome evil thoughts/
Smoking weed and pot and crashed the motor bike knievel bought/
I am crazy man and he is not/
I just want the recognition and the mass appeal that fucking jesus got/
Ima genius watch me work my magic with these words of habit as i scheme and plot on rappers that need to rot/
But all the beefing that just needs to stop/
Rest in piece to Big L, Proof, Jam Master J, and to B-I-G and Pac/

Link:

http://m.soundcloud.com/joshe2913/groun ... -joshearle

Thanks for checking it out.

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Re: Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby Evil Twin » Dec 10th, '13, 16:21

Loved this shit fam. You got a link to some of your other stuff?
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We're gonna rock this house until we knock it down
So turn the volume loud, cause it's mayhem 'til the a.m.
So baby make just like K-Fed and let yourself go, let yourself go
Say fuck it before we kick the bucket
Life's too short to not go for broke

Go Berzerk!
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Re: Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby cityfan31 » Dec 10th, '13, 22:56

Where did you get that beat from?? It's a nice remake. You certainly did it justice. Also sometimes it was like you were mirroring some of the flows Em used on this record, that was nice.
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Re: Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby Boston » Dec 10th, '13, 23:33

Evil twin appreciate it. And nah not anymore some shit on youtube. Majestic and asylum is on you tube. Might be under josh earle. I wana think i progressed so im moving forward and city i grabbed it off youtube. Thanks for checking out
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Re: Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby Eedee » Dec 11th, '13, 06:08

This was pretty legit. Was not expecting that lol.

Your delivery falters at points, but the flow is pretty good, you stay on beat. Although, since this is a remix, your flow mirrored his at times, so that always helps haha
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Re: Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby Boston » Dec 11th, '13, 12:41

Thanks eedee and i respect that basedshady. Cept i didnt copy his flow like that but i understand. Thank u for checking it out
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Re: Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby Boston » Dec 11th, '13, 13:20

I appreciate ur honesty though shady. Wasnt my intentions but i guess thats wat happens when u all bump is em and then do an em beat. Ill do some originals. How is it hard to follow though?
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Re: Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 11th, '13, 14:16

My Maaan!!

this is fire... your vocals are a bit too loud. Other than that, this is just flawless. Man, and the beat is an awesome remake. This reminds me of "Majestic".

awesome stuff bro.
I Don't think the flows were exactly the same as the original, I think you made some nice changes

anyhow, very very good remix man. If you can, fix the vocal volume a little bit. Other than that, enjoyable my friend.

good stuff
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Re: Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby Boston » Dec 11th, '13, 16:11

I appreciate it b.a.d - ill keep that in mind as well. I just go to the studio and let the engineer do his thing usually add my 2 cents here and there but thanks for checking it out

Wait bad? Ur big ax d?!

If so.. Majestic part 2 coming ;) haha jk
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Re: Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 11th, '13, 16:17

Boston wrote:
Wait bad? Ur big ax d?!


In flesh and bone :flower:

I don't have recording equipment at the moment, but yeah, I'll hit u up when I do
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Re: Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby Boston » Dec 11th, '13, 16:25

Yessir. Good to see ya still around
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Postby Mr.DGAF » Dec 13th, '13, 08:58

I actually enjoyed this a lot more than I thought I would. There's some points where your delivery is iffy (it gets shaky is the best way I could describe it) but the flow and lyrics are on point man. Don't have a lot of feed back, just to maybe work on sounding more confident at points.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby Boston » Dec 13th, '13, 12:47

I appreciate it guys thank u. Ill take all this and keep it in mind for when i go tonight
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Re: Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby Solace » Dec 14th, '13, 05:49

Yeah I really liked this, I would like it more on a different beat (I don't really like when lesser knowns go on really popular beats, it creates immediate grounds for comparison) but you're still a good rapper. You should chill on the amount of vocal tracks you got going on there though, just 1 and some overlays for the rhymes would sound a lot better
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Re: Groundhog Day remix.. Hope yall enjoy

Postby Boston » Dec 15th, '13, 13:57

Thanks man all i did was double the vocals. Ill try something different next time. Thanks
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