I'm above that (1 verse with chorus)

[Ka0t1c]

LOF http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=167628&p=2531780#p2531780


heads up. bad quality, using default laptop mic and recorder
my part is the verse only
also i typed lyrics in description, thanks for listening

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7oAs3bCigSM&feature=youtu.be

i am gonna re-record this and mix it, maybe add emotion

i might submit this to Who's the Illest

still not mixed but i did the verse over

[Restlesswon]

not a bad start man, bit off flow, second time you'll probably nail the delivery better. Looking forward to the mixed version.

[Ka0t1c]

i'm gonna get it mixed for free btw, i was told to use audacity and take out the beat, thanks for the feed

* i'm learning audacity and the audio quality and emotion are much improved, i just have to edit it and then i'll post it

[Ka0t1c]

i re-recorded, not mixed tho, i know absolutely nothing bout it and the guy who said he'd fix it doesn't know what he's doing apparantly so i got pissed, which helped my emotion on the audio at least, sounds better, but the quality isn't clear on my verse. (work in progress)

[Nick419]

Its kind of hard to understand what you're saying but as you mentioned thats due to the fact its not mixed yet. I like you're delivery. The rapid fire type of flow suits you. I'm looking forward to the final version man!

[Ka0t1c]

thanks i appreciate that, however, i'm disappointed with the guy who was gonna mix it, he is a phony... so this song is on the backburner with the rest of my "songs"

[Vice]

one of the few tolerable artists on this board, keep up the good work

do you mix your own tracks?

[Ka0t1c]

i don't mix, i know almost nothing about audio programs

[survce]

LOF. http://youtu.be/7oAs3bCigSM

That was tight. I love those flows. I would like be a part of one someday.

[Tash8]

yeah sorry man, but you need to rerecord this. The verse sounds good, i mean from what i can hear, but tbh i can't hear most of it...it fades in and out, not compressed properly. The quality is just awful, and that's obviously to do with laptop mic. The fact that the chorus and the prior verse sounded so good quality-wise, it made your verse sound way worse. I suggest rerecording this, cause the lyrics sounded good and i liked your double time flow.

[Ka0t1c]

thanks man, idk where this "project" is going now, the person who was gonna mix it turned out to be phony, i will get a mic sometime in near future, as for mixing, idk. i appreciate the listen and i totally agree about my verse's quality.

[Spyder]

so not to make you feel bad but i was hyped as shit thinking you were the first guy. dudes nice and the hook and beat were nice as well.

obv quality issues we know. as far as the verse goes not bad man, i dont think ive heard you spit before. you got a decent breath control and flow. just like someone said above you kinda mash your words together a bit and makes it hard to understand at some points. other than that pretty decent for a beginner. i would guess you are to audio anyway? just keep at it, learn to mix yourself so you dont have to rely on others

[last_player_alive]

it was pretty nice keep it up man i like the delivery.