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Re: My new song "A.D.H.D" - Vijilantee

Postby TheVipBro » Jan 24th, '14, 02:32

why do you sound bored or is it intentional because it sounds a lot like "Show me your genitals", also is that your voice? did you alter it? cuz it sounds way too deep for a 13 year old
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Re: My new song "A.D.H.D" - Vijilantee

Postby MistaVijilantee » Jan 24th, '14, 05:12

TheVipBro wrote:why do you sound bored or is it intentional because it sounds a lot like "Show me your genitals", also is that your voice? did you alter it? cuz it sounds way too deep for a 13 year old


When I rap, I rap with an inflection, I was really tired and had a cold - not trying to excuse it - so that's why I may sound slightly bored, but a lot of this song is sarcastic, if you notice.
If you meet me in person you would see that my voice clearly suits me, yes it's my actual voice, I'm going to release another more polished song soon, so you'll hear how I sound without fucking sinuses haha.
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Re: My new song "A.D.H.D" - Vijilantee

Postby MistaVijilantee » Jan 24th, '14, 05:15

Eedee wrote:Thought I fed this. Guess not... haha

Anyway, this was a very dope/chill song. For being only 13, you're got a great grasp on lyricism and whatnot. All that needs work is your flow and delivery at times. I know the hook was supposed to be bland or whatever, so I won't talk about that. But sometimes your flow falters in the sense that you do sound bored or you stretch words to fit the beat. It's not as smooth as it can be, although it is very solid.

I'll write/record for your cypher song with Dilz soon, by the way. :y:


For sure man, appreciate it.
Looking forward to your verse.
btw I'm 14 now guys, I released this shit like a day before my birthday.
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