Addicted (Prod. by Sinima)

[Mr.DGAF]

Whattup TR. Hopefully this gets some views. Shout out to Eedee for mixing and to Demaz for involuntarily helping me find the beat.

Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=169347
Song: https://soundcloud.com/mr-dgaf-1/mr-dgaf-addicted-prod-by

Lyrics

[Verse 1]
I’ve been stacking chips, gathered ammo
Then I add a clip, planned forever to attack this bitch
The rap game’s seen a million different artists fail
What separates my little gimmick, shit it’s hard to tell
I know the chances, but slowly parting
Towards a willing ignorance in hopes that if I don’t acknowledge
Limits in my own evolving then I’ll hit that zone that artists
Kill to get and spit the shit that shows my only goal from starts to finish this
The obstacles that’s stopping you is just a stepping stone
Cause heaven knows that impossible is the devil’s home
I’ll never show that I’m bothered, I’ll let you guess but know
That every stone you’ve tossed has formed the rock that I’ll be settled on
I thrive in doubt, and lately I’ve been finding out
The difference in a giant mouth and when there comes a time to shout
That time is now, buckle up, when the sun is up
I will pounce, from an up and comer to the one you love

[Hook]
(Give it up, you been missing long) It’s been a minute but the pen is clutched again
(This gimmick sucks, you'll never finish strong)I sense the end is coming, get another wind
(Give it up, another shitty song) I never mix it up the quitter doesn’t win
(Pick it up, your mission isn't off) I know my skin is tough but shit it doesn’t end

[Verse 2]
Like, I can’t trust people
I feel them judge but they never even once seen the struggle I’ve been stuck beating
I’m done being the one seen as a young seed, I’ve
Done things that humbled the toughest parts of my upbringing
There’s something and it’s jumping inside my body’s frame
I’m ashamed to show it, you can blame it on my awkward traits
The hardest part is when you look inside your foggy brain
And all along you thought that you had conquered what had caused you pain
I’m not over it, god only knows
I stopped hoping and I fought slowly though
The thoughts close again, I stop holding hope
And fall open in your arms, so it goes
I’m back it at, relapsed addict
The fact that I can’t beat that habit
Only goes to prove that I don’t know what to do
Cause I hate to be alone, but I’m loneliest with you

[Hook]
(Give it up, you been missing long) It’s been a minute but the pen is clutched again
(This gimmick sucks, you'll never finish strong)I sense the end is coming, get another wind
(Give it up, another shitty song) I never mix it up the quitter doesn’t win
(Pick it up, your mission isn't off) I know my skin is tough but shit it doesn’t end

[Verse 3]
I need a fix, tried to quit but ended up repeating it
Fighting with the fiend within, dying just to reach a pen
Likely I’ll repeat again but fuck it
I’m done with lying when I know the truth will set me free of sin
It could be worse, I’ve shook the hurt to push ahead
Book a verse within my head, took my worth of foolish steps
My views at best with this music is a stupid mess
I need you but you need rest, I see through that bull you said that
You would take my raw talent and evolve that into
A small planet, I’d revolve back until I saw that
The reason I was gone packed was just for you to launch tracks
And when I turned to fall back, you had left my art thrashed
That’s not the deal that we committed you bitch
I gave you everything I had and you’d repent for my sins
You labeled heaven as a path that would limit my skill
And for that angle I am trapped and addicted to spit

[Eedee]

Whew, son. You're sounding more and more confident with each song you record. It's great to hear. And as always, your writing/flow is dope as fuck.

"Loneliest with you" part sounded so sincere with your delivery. Makes my wee wee flutter.

Your album is gonna be siiiiick.

[Mr.DGAF]

Whew, son. You're sounding more and more confident with each song you record. It's great to hear. And as always, your writing/flow is dope as fuck.

"Loneliest with you" part sounded so sincere with your delivery. Makes my wee wee flutter.

Your album is gonna be siiiiick.

Thanks mane haha.

I really liked this song, I thought it was pretty dope....the recording and your audio was great, your voice sounds better from the last audio I heard from you.

I'm wondering if English is your first language?

Haha yeah it is. From North Carolina.

[Cinderella Stan]

It's the first song I hear from you and I can really feel it - the beat, the hook, everything. I'll be bumping this a lot in the next few days, that's for sure. To be honest, most times when I check out something in this section I end up loving it, even though I'm always a bit skeptical at first. I should come here more often.

[Mr.DGAF]

It's the first song I hear from you and I can really feel it - the beat, the hook, everything. I'll be bumping this a lot in the next few days, that's for sure. To be honest, most times when I check out something in this section I end up loving it, even though I'm always a bit skeptical at first. I should come here more often.

Thanks man, really appreciate it. And yeah, there's a bunch of talented people here for sure haha.

[MistaVijilantee]

You've got an awesomely unique delivery, and you utilize it quite well.
However, there are times during this song where you stretch out your phrases way to far making them lose the effect they might of had, this is mainly in the first verse although this section during that flows well.

"The obstacles that’s stopping you is just a stepping stone
Cause heaven knows that impossible is the devil’s home"

The 2nd verse is the stand out, very is to relate to - for me at least - and extremely well delivered.
Overall, good song, hook is dope./
Can't say much else, well done bruh

[FxTDilz]

fuck your getting so much better bro. flow more on point than ever on this track

[Mr.DGAF]

You've got an awesomely unique delivery, and you utilize it quite well.
However, there are times during this song where you stretch out your phrases way to far making them lose the effect they might of had, this is mainly in the first verse although this section during that flows well.

"The obstacles that’s stopping you is just a stepping stone
Cause heaven knows that impossible is the devil’s home"

The 2nd verse is the stand out, very is to relate to - for me at least - and extremely well delivered.
Overall, good song, hook is dope./
Can't say much else, well done bruh

Word up man, thanks for the feed!

fuck your getting so much better bro. flow more on point than ever on this track

My man.

[Mr.DGAF]

Not sure what else to add to what others above have said but this was pretty damn good. Your flow was on point and your rhyming was obviously good, I also enjoyed the hook.

Keep at it, son. That's all I can say for now.

Thanks mane.

[EvryOnesACrtc]

Damn, son. You have improved so much since the last time I posted here. I like your style; content and subject matter were brilliant, and you had rhymes to match.

"It could be worse, I’ve shook the hurt to push ahead
Book a verse within my head, took my worth of foolish steps
My views at best with this music is a stupid mess"

^^You had my head spinning at that part haha

Great stuff. The only thing I don't like is your voice. I think it's your delivery. Like, this is a serious track, but your tone was coming off comical at times. Idk what advice to give to improve on that, since I'm a beginner at this, but maybe that's something you can look into.

[sinceremusictsmtsg]

Your verses sounded good well put together and it was smooth going into the hook, the panning on the hook was a little awkward but worked out well enough, To much reverb or echo on verse vocals/ But i like your style and way of rapping you seem like a realist, the kind of artist id possible collab with. hit me up on fb ill show you some of my music as well im new on here just getting used to it. https://www.facebook.com/SincereWeagant

[Jaba]

This sounds great! I loved your flow-rhyme scheme and the that beat is amazing! Maybe we can do a song together in the future? We have sort of the same style. If you want I can produce some beats for you. I am pretty good at that. And I have heard some of your other things and my beats will fit you. I think on some of your songs you need to slow it down some.

[Mr.DGAF]

Hit me up homie, I'm always down to collab.