TJ Marrs - Bust A Nut

[tjmarrs20]

Link: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=170436&p=2616900#p2616900
Song: https://soundcloud.com/tj-marrs/bust-a-nut


So I'm still trying to get my recording down, I know the quality probably isn't perfect but I really want to get my stuff out there and see what people think of the content. I'll keep practicing recording though to make it better. Just let me know what you think. Thanks.

[DetroitSkills]

Really like this

[Mr.DGAF]

Meant to feed this earlier. Interesting song/subject matter for sure haha. Like you said, the recording stuff still needs to be ironed out. I think the hook is too loud, overall wasn't feeling the hook much at all haha. I did like the flow on the last verse doe. Still not a huge fan of your voice; this one was definitely a step up from the other song you posted vocally, as you said you were intentionally doing an annoying inflection on the last track.

Not really a song I love, but you did execute it in a unique/interesting way. I can see how others would enjoy it.

[sinceremusictsmtsg]

Well, to be honest, if you want to get your stuff out there and get alot of fans and good feedback.. You probably should come up with better concepts rather then busting a nut in a bitches mouth lol most of us do this, its nothing new and isn't very appealing to hear on a song lol Dont waste your time making songs like this have some meaning and inspiration to your music to inspire other artists, Maybe listen to some tupac and Nas and probable Immortal technique think about what there talking about do some research and start killing tracks homie. cuz that stuff aint gunna cut it in the music industry or give you a good look as an artist, I'm Sure you can do better then this homie clean up your concepts and lyrics and keep on doing ur thing never give up just try and not be like all these stupid rappers like solja boy lol you may have been just joking around on this track but it seemed pretty serious lol If you need help with engineering your tracks like mixing and mastering, I do that very well, add me on facebook wull talk I got a nice following as well. I can help you out. Other then that, you still seem like a rapper, And its within you. So thats my advice. As for this song tho lol
add me up - https://www.facebook.com/SincereWeagant

[tjmarrs20]

Well, to be honest, if you want to get your stuff out there and get alot of fans and good feedback.. You probably should come up with better concepts rather then busting a nut in a bitches mouth lol most of us do this, its nothing new and isn't very appealing to hear on a song lol Dont waste your time making songs like this have some meaning and inspiration to your music to inspire other artists, Maybe listen to some tupac and Nas and probable Immortal technique think about what there talking about do some research and start killing tracks homie. cuz that stuff aint gunna cut it in the music industry or give you a good look as an artist, I'm Sure you can do better then this homie clean up your concepts and lyrics and keep on doing ur thing never give up just try and not be like all these stupid rappers like solja boy lol you may have been just joking around on this track but it seemed pretty serious lol If you need help with engineering your tracks like mixing and mastering, I do that very well, add me on facebook wull talk I got a nice following as well. I can help you out. Other then that, you still seem like a rapper, And its within you. So thats my advice. As for this song tho lol
add me up - https://www.facebook.com/SincereWeagant

I do usually rap about more serious stuff but I felt like more people would prefer to hear songs like this. This song was made mostly for shock value. I do have deeper content in me. I just heard the beat and it gave me that disgusting vibe where I just wanted to say some messed up stuff. And yeah lol, I may have been a little serious in some parts of the song because it is based on true feelings that I have in me.

But yeah, I can definitely use help with my mixing and stuff. I've been doing research on it and stuff but mostly I've been phoning it in quality wise. I'll hit you up on facebook though

BTW, thanks for the feedback to everyone else also

[MistaVijilantee]

"I'll punch her so she shuts up".
The God smirked for a minute there
Hook isn't great but you have a pretty cool voice & some clever lyrics.

[j4ckh4mm3r]

good track overall, I wasn't really feeling the hook but the verses got better each time. You have a great voice and flow for rap. The last verse owned on this.
"call me a jerk, call me a demon, tell me my body's to small for my penis"

[tjmarrs20]

"I'll punch her so she shuts up".
The God smirked for a minute there
Hook isn't great but you have a pretty cool voice & some clever lyrics.

Thanks!