Brainless wrote:Your probably my favorite artist on TR that I have heard! I just downloaded this. I am currently working on an album. Want to feature on it?
Mr.DGAF wrote:Take Me Away
Hook is dope, I dig it. Beat is nice too, kind of an ominous feel on it. First verse is dope, very vivid and the delivery is somber enough to match the lyrics. Sometimes you don’t pronounce words fully when you rap; it isn’t often but I’ve noticed it a few times. Insomnia is the instance in the first verse haha. Just something to work on. Second verse is very dope, nothing to say about that one mane. Good shit.
I’ve Been Dead
Another dope beat. Like the guitar strings too. The hook is a bit iffy for me, I wasn’t really feeling it but whatever haha. That kaleidoscope bar is dope breh. Nothing crazy on the first verse. I liked your flow, it seemed a bit different from your usual flow. There was one part where you sped up a lot, I think because you took too large of a breath in between the bar but YOLO. Really like your delivery here, the emotion is something I don’t hear much from you, which is weird since most of your stuff is emotional. Seemed really passionate. Verse three is epic, you do a nice job matching the increasing intensity of the beat with your delivery. Very nice.
I really like the hook on this one. The beat is fucking dope too. That seesaw line is dope tbh. Flow was pretty simple but it works for the beat, got no complaints there. I thought the ad libs might’ve gone a bit too long but there was a space in between bars you had to fill so I guess I get it. Like the money theme of this one, not something I think I’ve heard from you before.
Words Can’t Describe
I haven’t listened to this entire song yet but I’m guessing this is about rap? I’ll update in the paragraph if I’m right or not. Anyway, beat is dope as usual on this one. I think I wrote to this a while ago. Hook sounds kinda creepy but I like it. Verse 1 is solid. Verse 2 is dope as well. You didn’t come out and say it so it might not be about rap but I heard the whole song with that vibe hahaha. Oh well. This is prob my second fave so far behind Hard Times.
Never Change Again
I love this beat/hook. I wrote and recorded to it a while ago and it’s still a personal fave. Mixing on this one feels good. The delivery on “cock inflated” was a bit weird, and honestly I’m not a huge fan of the line but it’s just one line haha. The opening of verse two is fucking sick. The flow/delivery and lyrics are on point man, very honest shit with some solid writing to back it. Really like the repetition at the end of your verses on not just this song but a few others. Strong way to close out your verses.
Pick Up Your Phone
This one seems pretty brutally honest. The writing on it is really, really good. I feel like the end of the second verse caught me off guard but I guess that’s life man. Your reaction to it at first made me feel a bit weird, especially with you blowing off her hard “no” as eventually she’ll come around, but I think that’s a pretty good look into how it feels to be in love with someone. Shit’s kinda hopeless and this encapsulates the reasons to keep hope. Noice.
Listen To Your Heart
I like the sample tbh. This tape feels a lot like one inspired by a female. The progression of the songs is kind of like the start of a relationship and that’s pretty cool. Writing is solid as usual man. Seemed very heartfelt. The last verse is the best on the song, you did a really good job of being really descriptive while maintaining flow and rhymes. Not too much else to say on this one.
I'll feed the bonus songs later but the kindergarten days song is sick, I love that sample haha.
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