lmao i know you made the beat on garage band, i made a similar one with that loop hahaah. sorry, i found that too funny. i like how you mess with your voice pitch to create a context. the pitch shift at times can make your voice hard to understand (especially when you do the deep voice pitch shift). its a nice start tho.
i got a song posted here, its labeled AhdduB. if you could critique, it be much appreciated!