Brainless - Bike Ride - From: My Story

[Jaba]

This song is just sort of about different things I do. And one of the things I do to clear my mind is bike riding. The Chorus and part of the verses are just freestyles (the parts I could remember) from when I was on a bike ride (hence the name of the song).

Feed - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=162759&p=2639065#p2639065

Song - https://soundcloud.com/suvivor/02-bike-ride

Let me know what you think! Don't take this too serious. I made this in a day. SO its not too great. My next song is gonna be FIRE! This next beat I am making is the best one I've made!

[MistaVijilantee]

The production is smooth as fuck, awesome beat.
I like the "bicycle" refrain it sounds almost hypnotic./
On a few occasions your flow is a bit off and you sound a bit to much like Eminem earlier on but as the track progresses you sort of sound a bit more unique for some reason, if that makes sense.
Fun lyrics, nice track, look forward to more

[Jaba]

The production is smooth as fuck, awesome beat.
I like the "bicycle" refrain it sounds almost hypnotic./
On a few occasions your flow is a bit off and you sound a bit to much like Eminem earlier on but as the track progresses you sort of sound a bit more unique for some reason, if that makes sense.
Fun lyrics, nice track, look forward to more

Thanks. I think you say I sound like Em just cus my voice is high. I didn't try to do that. And what do you mean by the bicycle refrain?

[TheVipBro]

nah, just your flow is really alike, you even do the same pauses and stuff. Kind of like relapse-Recovery flows and stuff.

Production is good, You need to speak up a bit more like i said on the "my story" thread but it's good for showing us what you're working on so far

[Jaba]

nah, just your flow is really alike, you even do the same pauses and stuff. Kind of like relapse-Recovery flows and stuff.

Production is good, You need to speak up a bit more like i said on the "my story" thread but it's good for showing us what you're working on so far

Thanks! And I know. Well see I turned it down (my voice) cus in garageband it sounds wayyy louder. But thanks.

[MistaVijilantee]

The production is smooth as fuck, awesome beat.
I like the "bicycle" refrain it sounds almost hypnotic./
On a few occasions your flow is a bit off and you sound a bit to much like Eminem earlier on but as the track progresses you sort of sound a bit more unique for some reason, if that makes sense.
Fun lyrics, nice track, look forward to more

Thanks. I think you say I sound like Em just cus my voice is high. I didn't try to do that. And what do you mean by the bicycle refrain?

Shit, sorry where you're like "peddle, peddle, peddle".

[Jaba]

The production is smooth as fuck, awesome beat.
I like the "bicycle" refrain it sounds almost hypnotic./
On a few occasions your flow is a bit off and you sound a bit to much like Eminem earlier on but as the track progresses you sort of sound a bit more unique for some reason, if that makes sense.
Fun lyrics, nice track, look forward to more

Thanks. I think you say I sound like Em just cus my voice is high. I didn't try to do that. And what do you mean by the bicycle refrain?

Shit, sorry where you're like "peddle, peddle, peddle".

OH haha. Yeah I like that too! My next track I think is gonna be my best (so far).