My New Song About Doritos - Vijilantee

[MistaVijilantee]

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Yo,
Here is my latest song I recorded with a good mate of mine, as the title suggests it's about Doritos.
Don't be deterred, have a listen and drop some feedback.
Cheers.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yohDaTx ... e=youtu.be

[HotDawg]

nice

[MistaVijilantee]

nice

Thanks, any other feedback or thoughts?

[Eedee]

Lol this was interesting. Your delivery falters a bit, for example: "On my Frito Lay..." bar, you kinda stumbled or skip words. Quality was fucking sick!.

Doritos are fucking good though, so propzzzz

[MistaVijilantee]

Lol this was interesting. Your delivery falters a bit, for example: "On my Frito Lay..." bar, you kinda stumbled or skip words. Quality was fucking sick!.

Doritos are fucking good though, so propzzzz

Wicked.
Cheers bruh, when you say falter do you mean I was off beat or?

[mdemaz]

Damn. Good shit. Makes me wanna eat some Doritos for some odd reason.

Fuck it, brb...

[Eedee]

Lol this was interesting. Your delivery falters a bit, for example: "On my Frito Lay..." bar, you kinda stumbled or skip words. Quality was fucking sick!.

Doritos are fucking good though, so propzzzz

Wicked.
Cheers bruh, when you say falter do you mean I was off beat or?

Falter as in you stumble over words, like you're not enunciating clearly.

[MistaVijilantee]

Lol this was interesting. Your delivery falters a bit, for example: "On my Frito Lay..." bar, you kinda stumbled or skip words. Quality was fucking sick!.

Doritos are fucking good though, so propzzzz

Wicked.
Cheers bruh, when you say falter do you mean I was off beat or?

Falter as in you stumble over words, like you're not enunciating clearly.

Yeah, I've actually notice that. Like when I talk generally.
Not all the time, but sometimes I forget what I'm saying and go to say something else then slur haha.
Thank you for your feedback

[MistaVijilantee]

Damn. Good shit. Makes me wanna eat some Doritos for some odd reason.

Fuck it, brb...

Thank you sir, I gotta hit up Doritos with this song.

Bump.

[FxTDilz]

Definitely a different choice of topic haha. Myself being a guitarist I really appreciate the guitar instrumental you've got going on, it sounds nice and it's cool that for a lot of it your rapping over it with no beat behind it, I love when rappers do that. I do think your delivery was a bit deep to go with the chords being played and it kinda makes me not take it as serious (even though it's not a serious song). I also liked the other guy singing, who is he?

[MistaVijilantee]

Definitely a different choice of topic haha. Myself being a guitarist I really appreciate the guitar instrumental you've got going on, it sounds nice and it's cool that for a lot of it your rapping over it with no beat behind it, I love when rappers do that. I do think your delivery was a bit deep to go with the chords being played and it kinda makes me not take it as serious (even though it's not a serious song). I also liked the other guy singing, who is he?

The singers is a good mate of mine - Cooper Lower, he was also playing the guitar.
If you YT his name he's got a few awesome cover songs on there.
Ha, it's interesting you say that. Myself & Cooper are working on more stuff in the future so I'll ask him about that, he'll probably understand the technical side more with the chords and such haha.
I think that's happened in the past with certain beats I've rapped over like they don't fit my voice so I've got to pick and choose.
Nice feed bro, much appreciated

[Mr.DGAF]

Haha that bridge. Good shit. Your delivery is dope for this track too. I feel like the last song I fed for you was a joke type song too and idk if that's what your delivery is best suited for, but it definitely works in this case. You do slur some words occasionally, it seems like mostly with words with predominantly the letter S in them. i.e the "tasty treat line", "chicks with fat asses" lines have some pretty big slurs where I can't make out most of the words before them. IDK what advice to give for that because it's something I do too haha, I guess punch in's could be best for that just to get the perfect delivery and enunciation. The hook is dope tbh haha. The flow on the "handsome G" line in the second verse is a bit loose, coulda tightened it up a bit but it's nothing major.

Overall definitely a fun song to listen to, and you're pretty damn good at what you do. Just some points to fine tune to really take the song to the next level.

[MistaVijilantee]

Haha that bridge. Good shit. Your delivery is dope for this track too. I feel like the last song I fed for you was a joke type song too and idk if that's what your delivery is best suited for, but it definitely works in this case. You do slur some words occasionally, it seems like mostly with words with predominantly the letter S in them. i.e the "tasty treat line", "chicks with fat asses" lines have some pretty big slurs where I can't make out most of the words before them. IDK what advice to give for that because it's something I do too haha, I guess punch in's could be best for that just to get the perfect delivery and enunciation. The hook is dope tbh haha. The flow on the "handsome G" line in the second verse is a bit loose, coulda tightened it up a bit but it's nothing major.

Overall definitely a fun song to listen to, and you're pretty damn good at what you do. Just some points to fine tune to really take the song to the next level.

This is some awesome feedback, brother!
I'll definitely focus on not slurring in future or at least enunciation with words I'm weak in.
Most of my songs have some comedic element - because I pretty much make fun of anything or anyone including myself.
I've got a bunch of songs that are more serious and reflective but I figured why not put out a few songs that makes people laugh haha? I'm hoping I'll have the opportunity to record some more stuff soon

[MistaVijilantee]

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[gutawafang]

Sounds professional man. Nice mixing. Especially chorus man. The entire song was funny I guess. I mean, I can't relate to Doritos cuz I don't eat Doritos. I don't think I've eaten them before. I assume they're chips.

Loved the chorus the most. Nice singing man seriously.

9/10 for creativity.