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12 At Night - Brainless Feat. Eedee & Mr.DGAF - SINGLE

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12 At Night - Brainless Feat. Eedee & Mr.DGAF - SINGLE

Postby Jaba » May 5th, '14, 02:15

Single from my new album "My Story". This is a horror-rap song. Features Eedee and Mr.DGAF. Please give reviews on everyones verse and the song.

Credit -
Mixed by - Brainless, and Eedee
Produced by - Brainless
Vocals - Brainless, Eedee, and Mr.DGAF

Song Link (NO DOWNLOAD LINK, will be able to download later with the rest of the album) -

https://soundcloud.com/suvivor/03-12-at-night

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You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
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Forgive me father, for I have sinned
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Re: 12 At Night - Brainless Feat. Eedee & Mr.DGAF - SINGLE

Postby Eedee » May 5th, '14, 03:29

I edited in a link of feed for you, just know in the future you need a link of feedback (no older than 10 days) for your thread to stay open. :y:
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Re: 12 At Night - Brainless Feat. Eedee & Mr.DGAF - SINGLE

Postby mdemaz » May 5th, '14, 06:09

Welp, this shit just happened.

Brainless needs heaps of work; but, he's good enough to educate. I think his main problem is that he mumbles a lot and stutters a lot. That type of shit is easily fixed with some practice. He starts out alright for the first few seconds of his verse and then he starts to stumble.

Solid verses from DGAF and Eedee.

Whew. :y:
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Re: 12 At Night - Brainless Feat. Eedee & Mr.DGAF - SINGLE

Postby MistaVijilantee » May 5th, '14, 09:54

Brainless keeps coming with that ill production.
Nice hook btw.
DGAF had mad multies & good storytelling, I too kill bitches when they talk about my rhymes negatively :smoking:
Eedee the Gawd your recording quality was top notch, nice choppity-chopping.
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Re: 12 At Night - Brainless Feat. Eedee & Mr.DGAF - SINGLE

Postby Jaba » May 5th, '14, 15:08

Thanks for the feedback. I do need to work on my flow, but the flow in this somg was supposed to sorta be studdery (for my verse at least). Ill be releasing ONE last single before the album comes out.
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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Re: 12 At Night - Brainless Feat. Eedee & Mr.DGAF - SINGLE

Postby DetroitSkills » May 5th, '14, 16:49

bigray wrote:I felt that brainless needs to work on his flow and delivery, i also couldnt understand your lyrics and I thought your recording wasn't that great compared to eedee and dgaf.....the beat was fire IMO like 10/10

Dgaf was fire imo probably one of the nicest verse from him I heard in terms of his voice and delivery.

Eedee this was a nice change from your last album and I really enjoyed your verse and your recording sounded really nice.

i agree tbh, i also love the beat
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Re: 12 At Night - Brainless Feat. Eedee & Mr.DGAF - SINGLE

Postby Jaba » May 5th, '14, 18:16

Thanks. And yeah, i record on a macbook microphone (built in) so yeah.
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Singin' "Bagpipes from Baghdad" again
In my dad's drag draggin' a faggot in a Glad bag
Won't be the last time I make a dramatic entrance like that again
You thought I was lyin' when I said I think that I'm crossin' the line again
I've lost my mind, caution oh God I think I've just thought of another fucking line
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But hip hop has left me brainwashed with a violent streak
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