So Confused - Brainless - Off "My Story" - LAST SINGLE

[Jaba]

This is my new song So Confused. It is my last single before My Story the album comes out. Please review the track and beat since I made it all. Lyrics in the CHORUS are written by TheVipBro.

http://www.mediafire.com/listen/5dsezt5 ... nfused.m4a

I think mediafire destroys the quality a little bit but the quality of the song sounds much betetr on my pc and it will sound better when the album download it out.

ALSO please let me know if your going to download the album to check it out (it will be free) cus I dont want to wait for the whole thing to upload if 0 ppl are going to check it out. EVEN if 1 person wants to hear the whole album Ill upload it, album expected to drop May 24ish.

LOF
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=171263&p=2661191#p2661191

[TheVipBro]

Fist verse has like a weird flow tbh, you can see a big improvement on second verse though, more understandable

[Eedee]

You should invest your time into getting a Soundcloud IMO

Yeah VipBro was right, the second verse has a bit better enunciation, I think it's the adlibs that are jumbling your delivery.

Also, turn the volume of everything up, the vocals more-so.

[Mr.DGAF]

I really like the beat. You've clearly got a good ear for music because otherwise you wouldn't be able to make such solid beats. However, your actual rapping is tough to decipher. I'll chalk it up to the mic you're recording with. I think I saw you say you use a built-in laptop microphone? If you're serious about trying to make music you're gonna need something better, if for nothing more than us hearing your voice. It could be because the beat is naturally loud, but the mic quality makes it difficult to understand what you're saying.

The flow on the first verse is something I've heard you use a lot, it kinda reminds me of some modern Em type flow. You mirror the beat and have a couple of choppy pauses, which is cool but I can't really make any of it out because of the mic haha. Second verse is a bit more clear partially because of flow and because it seems a bit louder. Once you get a new mic I'd also try and study up on mixing vocals too because your verses sound pretty raw quality wise. I can't mix for shit, you might be better off trying to get someone to do it for you if you're not satisfied with how it turned out yourself. The delivery is decent but I can tell you're still a little timid, which is just something that's gonna pass in time. Eventually your voice will become more confident and it'll reflect in the music.

Keep at it homie.

[Jaba]

Thanks for feedback. Sorry i didnt post a LOF, i will when i get home.

[Eedee]

Thanks for feedback. Sorry i didnt post a LOF, i will when i get home.

Just feed my new song or something lol

I'll keep this open, cause I know you'll get that link for me ASAP. Just edit it into your OP.

[MistaVijilantee]

If you sold your some of the beats you made you could get enough money to get a better mic.
You can obviously flow but it's not always clear what you're saying, I'm not blaming this on you - i know that in built mic struggle.