Atone The Underdog - Nothing To Lose

[Atone]

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"Nothing To Lose"
http://www.reverbnation.com/atonetheund ... d-by-beats

This one was made after listening to Eminem's "Rap God", now, i did make this song before in 2010, and it was awful, i felt i could make it so much better, so, i re-wrote and re-recorded it,

[Jaba]

OK beat. And ok lyrics. I don't like the autotune.

[mdemaz]

Damn...

This is actually fucking nuts.

[Ticalrecords]

i like the beat alot! i can tell that you know how to flow, it was pretty decent. the delivery needs to be a lil stronger. i like how you take a breath and then say "with every breath in my lungs" ... idk i thot it was funny

[Spyder]

for me it was hard to find the flow, but again thats me talking about flow so...

you still sound muffled and almost nasal when you rap, still sound like you dont want someone to hear you a bit. also the lyrics seemed like a lot of simplistic rhyming in that, "rendition, emission, devision etc" are all just easy to rhyme that last syllable.

improvement from what i remember though.

[Mr.DGAF]

On the plus side, the delivery is a lot better than I remember from your older stuff. I don't even mind the quality too much, though it's not particularly great. But the flow is way off man. You just kinda talk through it all, there doesn't seem to be any rhythm and there's a lot of awkward silence in parts of the verse. The second verse starts out kind of on beat though so that's cool haha. IDK, it seems like you're getting better at other things, but flow is like one of the most important things to make music listenable and you still don't have it down perfectly.

[iain08]

Hahaha I finally come back here and this fuck is still posting songs, jesus.

[Atone]

Hahaha I finally come back here and this fuck is still posting songs, jesus.

Go away again, come back next year, i will still be posting, quit bitchin